Thu21Apr2011

The Guardian Legend

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Royan Arizal
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Ada Raja Dewa sama Raja Kegelapan, mereka berantem sama2 kuat tapi raja kglapan pke jurus terlarang akhirnya raja dewa mati.. dan sbelum mati dy udh punya 3 anak dan 1 istri..ke3 anak itu diturunin kebumi sama ibunya akhirnya mreka diasuh sama orang tua angkat dan mreka ga tau klo mreka dewa suatu saat pas anak pertama(Hyuga) lg skolah liat ada orang ngmng jangan msuk ke ruangan itu..tetep aja dy masuk dan denger ada suara cewe nangis ternyata dy peri nah dy nangz gara2 dunia dewa mau dikuasai kegelapan..peri minta bantuan ma hyuga biar mbantuin akhirnya dy dikasih pin guarder klo dy butuh dy bsa berubah dan semua adiknya juga dikasih pin gurader..lalu mreka dan temen2 bumi lain yg dipilih dpet pin guarder dan mreka ke dunia dewa sama peri tersebut....pertempuran dimulai !!

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  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    tambah

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 28 April, 2011 - 19:24.
    1

    tambah lagi storynya tiga porsi:p
    looll..gw jadi mikir makanan Laughing out loud

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    use formal words in making

    Submitted by Crow on 22 April, 2011 - 14:18.
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    use formal words in making story, a thypo too, i havent read your story yet but when i read the narration i lost interest, make sure to ask people who are expert in that part. and make sure to fix your story if it is too bad..

    sorry if i keep posting in craps.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    kurang

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 21 April, 2011 - 15:27.
    1

    kurang nih!!!!!

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
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