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Ehm, I made this for Komik contest, the theme is "Peace". So the story is about a group of young men&women to create a world peace. 

I failed in that contest. Hehe. So I guess it must be so many correction that can do for this one, and I hope all friends in Komikoo can help me find those. Thank youuu...

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  • yos's picture

    waw bener2 menyentil

    Submitted by yos (not verified) on 4 May, 2011 - 23:21.
    4

    waw bener2 menyentil ceritanya...
    as expected from enji...

  • gitta sorraya's picture

    yang ini juga....

    Submitted by gitta sorraya on 24 February, 2011 - 15:09.
    5

    wahahahaha....yang ini jg kereeennn...enji kereennn!!!! Laughing out loud

  • mikemieke's picture

    warna ny keren.. tulisan ny

    Submitted by mikemieke on 10 February, 2011 - 20:30.

    warna ny keren..
    tulisan ny kebaca..
    cerita ny juga bagus..
    seep..lanjutkan..wakakkaka

  • kombek's picture

    waduh jadi rusuh haha.

    Submitted by kombek on 23 January, 2011 - 12:53.

    waduh jadi rusuh haha. warnanya oke loh !!

  • Crow's picture

    i'll be patiently waiting for

    Submitted by Crow on 19 January, 2011 - 10:54.

    i'll be patiently waiting for you..

    good luck

    i do expect a lot more  of you

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • enjisapi's picture

    Yep, I know that 2 of my last

    Submitted by enjisapi on 19 January, 2011 - 10:13.

    Yep, I know that 2 of my last lines of panels might seem too tight, becoz there are too many arguments, and I want to show the readers that people are having a fight Laughing out loud

    Too fast? hee... the rule for the competition is one page comic, so this way I made it Smile

    Ohhh, you mean space BETWEEN two panels. Got it then. 

    Thank you very much, Gianeka, for ur supporting comment. I'm sure it'll useful for my next comic Smile *bow*

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • Crow's picture

    hey .......................it

    Submitted by Crow on 18 January, 2011 - 11:55.

    hey .......................

    it is your third and forth line of panels that kinda crowdy...

    maybe it is because your colour, dont you feel it?

    well what i mean with awkward is, your story's pace is kinda too fast...

    and you know, the space between two panel is just too close...and that's what makes your manga (or comic)..kinda crowdy

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • enjisapi's picture

    @gianeka : thanx 4 ur

    Submitted by enjisapi on 18 January, 2011 - 10:56.

    @gianeka : thanx 4 ur comment, but i need u to explain more bout it.

    messy speaking balloon. which one did u mean? from all of my panels, or just some part; at the bottom, or... where...??

    awkward? well... if u thought so, okay then, everyone's free to say what they feel, but i'd be glad if u can tell me why did u said awkward, and how it supposed to be?

    add some space on the panel? haha. i do thought that there were too many spaces on my panels Laughing out loud

    u said nice drawing, but u put "ups" on it, so i don't really get ur point. can I take it as compliment? haha.

    Well, anyway, thanx for reading my comics. 

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • enjisapi's picture

    @boam : hee, iya, ya? soalnya

    Submitted by enjisapi on 18 January, 2011 - 10:40.

    @boam : hee, iya, ya? soalnya kemarin lombanya ini untuk komikus remaja gitu, jadi emang sengaja digambarin yang simpel, trus mungkin sering dialami sama temen2... gitu, sih. tapiii ternyata malah jadi kurang berbobot. haha. my bad... thanx anyway... Smile

     

    @yustian : haha. iya, gitu ceritanya. makasih komennya, ya... Smile

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • enjisapi's picture

    @kiky : hehe, makasih, yak!

    Submitted by enjisapi on 18 January, 2011 - 10:30.

    @kiky : hehe, makasih, yak!

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    wah..

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 16 January, 2011 - 18:41.

    wah..akhirnya bisa ke buka juga...

    keren juga pewarnaannya

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • boam's picture

    tema perdmaian

    Submitted by boam on 16 January, 2011 - 17:58.

    pesan nya sih sampe, coba kalo pake cara yang lebih baik ntuk mnyampaikan sebuah makna kedamaian...

    pasti bisa menang,

    kurang berbobot untuk sbuah pesan yang mendlam

    "As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be
  • yustian's picture

    gambarnya OK, temanya juga

    Submitted by yustian on 16 January, 2011 - 14:12.

    gambarnya OK, temanya juga OK

    mau mengawali untuk melakukan orasi world peace, malah akhirnya kelompok tsb ga cinta damai sendiri...

  • Crow's picture

    nice message

    Submitted by Crow on 16 January, 2011 - 13:30.

    messy speaking balloon..

    awkward storyline..

    the ups...nice drawings,well at least add some space on the panels

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    ku coba buka dlu deh

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 16 January, 2011 - 13:25.

    ku coba buka lagi deh..

    kali aja dah bisa dibuka

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • ddum_RyuZentju's picture

    wow

    Submitted by ddum_RyuZentju on 16 January, 2011 - 13:24.

    ceritanya gokil banget

    walau stu page saja

  • enjisapi's picture

    iya, nih, kemaren2 sempet ga

    Submitted by enjisapi on 16 January, 2011 - 13:14.

    iya, nih, kemaren2 sempet ga bisa buka page ini. keknya gara sizenya kegedean, dehh *analisa sok tau*

    semoga sekarang sudah nggak bermasalah lagi Smile

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    kenapa

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 15 January, 2011 - 08:56.

    kenapa gak bisa ku buka y??

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    cant open

    Submitted by Crow on 15 January, 2011 - 02:43.

    link is broken

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • boam's picture

    di cek dong, :)

    Submitted by boam on 13 January, 2011 - 23:58.

    saya ga bisa buka komiknya...

    gimana neh,

    kalo ud bisa contact yaaah... pgn baca komiknya, pleasee

    thanksss

    "As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be
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