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  • Crow's picture

    Actually about the grammar it

    Submitted by Crow on 25 April, 2011 - 19:47.
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    Actually about the grammar it does not matter at all since it is a cool thing already, and formal is the best way anywhere, that means university.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    oh iya...

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 29 March, 2011 - 17:29.
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    oh iyaa...agak kelupaan nih...
    masalah grammar bahasa indonesia....
    terlalu baku-__- contohnya kata seizin itu....

    klo bahasa komik kan gak peru baku segala...-_- contohnya aja detektif conan,,,yang penting maksudnya jelas kom... Laughing out loud

    keep on breathing.....

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    that was great, the message

    Submitted by Crow on 29 March, 2011 - 13:24.
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    that was great, the message is for us not to abandon our friends.
    that was really something,
    and everything seems match really well. the art, background and all..
    just, this kind of story, i've seen that somewhere that is far greater...i dont want to compare with yours since people has their own style, thanks for posting, this story is interesting

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    kom faris

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 25 March, 2011 - 14:36.
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    ternyata apa yang dikatakan kom faris mengenai komikmu mw diterbitin itu bener ya...
    ku perhatiin setiap detail yang ada pada page,,tapi ada kekurangan yang jelas terlihat...yaitu ukuran mukanya yang lancip....klo itu gambarnya emang khas begitu ga apa2...^^

    masalah membubuhkan bahasa jepang juga bagus..cuman,,fontnya itu aku rasa kurang cocok...dengan komik2 jepang yang kubaca selama ini Laughing out loud

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • administrator's picture

    waah! jauh lebih bagus

    Submitted by administrator on 25 March, 2011 - 13:51.
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    waah! jauh lebih bagus dibanding yang sebelumnya (thousand light).. jadi gak sabar nunggu yang berikutnya Laughing out loud

    we come in peace
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