TEASER 2Ends17 #2

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READ : TEASER OF THE chapter 2!!! 2Ends17 ~ The End Of PRomised Land~ *Remake*

Ini adalah sebuah kisah yang kupelajari, dr seorang pria dan wanita... Yang kehidupannya ditolak seluruh dunia... ~Sora Aphrodite, 2x34~

WebPage dr Komik ini bakal diupdate buat ngasih teaser dr upcoming chapter, see u

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chapter 1 link: http://komikoo.com/node/6629

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  • RPGNoZero's picture

    Chapter 2 is

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    Chapter 2 is UP!!!!!
    http://komikoo.com/komik/chapter-2-saviour-liar

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • Dudy Subagdja's picture

    bagusss....... makin asyik

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    bagusss....... makin asyik makin seru..... lanjut RPGnoZero !!! Wink semangat!!!

    "Unfolds wing...hunddles up word !!!file:///D:/Pelpinz/chupu%20Silvy/frofile%202.jpg
  • Akbar Rahman's picture

    WESSS bagus kk! efek hujannya

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    WESSS bagus kk! efek hujannya kayak beneran, ajarin dong heheh Laughing out loud

    Kawan Bukan Lawan
  • faathir95's picture

    kk isi dong kata2nya dipage2

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    kk isi dong kata2nya dipage2 yg kotaknya masih kosong Smile

    maaf saya masih amatiran
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    @faathir95 EAAA GOD JOB ini

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    @faathir95 EAAA GOD JOB
    ini kan cuma teaser, ga wajib lah....
    tunjguu fullnya aja nanti, wkwkwkkwkw
    baru deh lihat yg text

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    @alleyg ahaha cuma teaser

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    @alleyg ahaha cuma teaser bro, bbrp halaman juga cuma oe kasih ygh tanpa teks jadiny... Tunggu fullnya yach!!
    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • alleyG's picture

    bagus nich konsep

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    bagus nich konsep ceritanya... tapi, page 6 s/d 9 mana teks-nya ya bo.. Tongue

  • Crow's picture

    ah okay okay i get it, let's

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    ah okay okay i get it, let's consider you are the winner then.
    You know RPG san, drawing, stuff like that, you need it grand in the chapter 1, 2 to 10 or 12 maybe, grab enough fans and they'll start to think that drawing is in second. You knew Air gear? how about Oh great's drawing? great? can't argue.. but in fact in this harsh society, there is someone who would willingly said that "Air Gear, suck! it's the worst comic i read! Ikki's Suck! i don't want to read Air Gear anymore!" Do you know what does that means?

    IMO,well it's about the market's opinion, if you are aiming to get sold a lot, sold a whole lot of bunch of your comic, aim for the kids and present great and wonderfully awesome drawing.. they'll get interested in a single glance and waiting for the hero of your comic to pose a cool pose all the time, but no romance and ecchi scene. But if you are aiming to an adult reader, minimal drawing, or at least nice enough drawing is enough, as long as it's acceptable and well done..but the story, you have to make it wonderful and unthinkable.. or at least close to both of em..

    that's the difference, it's another matter when you are aiming self satisfaction, you have to feel it, art is not about technical stuff all the time, it's about feeling too... i told you the second ingredients right?

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    Ok.... halaman yg mash

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    Ok....

    halaman yg mash pensil telah diupdate dgn versi (mungkin) selesai...

    Silakan dibaca...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    Apakah kau akan

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    Apakah kau akan menungguku...
    Berhari-hari
    Berbulan-bulan
    Bertahun-tahun sekalipun?
    Wkkwwkkwwk

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • iqblank's picture

    jd penasaran ma crita-ny nie

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    jd penasaran ma crita-ny nie Laughing out loud

    semangat seleseiin komikX oe tungguin

    :paws: @iqblank
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    Inking ketebelan yg mana?

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    Inking ketebelan yg mana? Kayny blm ada yg diinking tuh hehe.

    Page 2ny emng gbr lama sih...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • Bob Raigen's picture

    keren XD hmm mungkin

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    keren XD hmm mungkin inkingnya agak ketebalan untuk karakternya, tp sketsanya rapi kok XD ganbattene XD

  • RPGNoZero's picture

    hahaha ya udh deh, bgt 3 page

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    hahaha ya udh deh, bgt 3 page pertama selese lnsng diganti

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • Damantine's picture

    hmmm... no komennnn.. abizzz

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    hmmm... no komennnn.. abizzz masih belarakan gini.. masih dalam bentuk name tapi masih acak2 an... seharusnya namanya teaser pastinya lebih baik dari sekedar name Smile ayo rpg anda pasti bisa... buka KARDUSnya <---- KP?K
    wakakkakaakakakakakkaka

    ANDA PASTI BISA Smile GANBATTE~~~

    Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    haha bg sdng dlm

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    haha bg sdng dlm proses....
    br satu gambar kota aja udh bikin stress

    benar.. inking tuh musuh yang sangaaaat besar

    @ gian Tetapi, gimanapun semua org pasti melihat gambar, terutama cover. Dan summarynya dulu...
    jadi gambar tetap NO.1 di kategori saya...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • 33 san's picture

    setuju ama simpleline

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    setuju ama simpleline daaaan... jangan males gambar BG yo ^.^v

    (kayaknya inking itu salah satu musuh terbesar komikus ya?)

  • Crow's picture

    now now, you sure know how to

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    now now, you sure know how to do things eh...well let's see how the manuscript will be look like. Ah...and nice, thank you for using that random character i made for you.. thanks,
    ung.. and RPG san, make sure to be careful with the panel and angle, and ah.. the wording..
    you know, when you can make an interesting story, your drawing will come in second in a reader's mind, but make sure to make it neat tough...
    nice nice... good luck

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    @ simpleline boleh saja...

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    @ simpleline boleh saja... INKING MASIH MENUNGGU ALAT ahaha... ayo hajaar!!!! drpd hasil jadinya yg dihajar

    @ om jan silakan tunggu dgn tenang sampe setengah tahun haha

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • Januar Q Chaiianc's picture

    d tunggu versi FULLnya...

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    d tunggu versi FULLnya... hohoho Laughing out loud

    With the Great Power Comes the Great Responsibility

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