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Savh seorang anak yang bercita-cita ingin menjadi ahli kembang apa iapun mangikuti beberapa kejuaraan bersama temannya,akhirnya Savh mendapatkan ide untuk membuat kembang api raflesia..

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  • Crow's picture

    good luck for the next then

    Submitted by Crow on 29 April, 2011 - 11:05.
    2

    good luck for the next then asepbasori san

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • asepbassori's picture

    you

    Submitted by asepbassori on 13 March, 2011 - 14:20.

    okey....thanks ya udah baca...

  • boam's picture

    ehe

    Submitted by boam on 29 January, 2011 - 00:49.

    lumayan, hehehe

    teralu banyak wajah di setiap page...

    ga bagus kalo begitu

    tetapi, terus berkarya ya

    "As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be
  • Crow's picture

    background...................

    Submitted by Crow on 18 January, 2011 - 11:37.

    background....................

    it is pretty nice story you know..

    i mean, i got lost at some point but that's fine...

    add some background and this will be a perfect style shojo manga..

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • ddum_RyuZentju's picture

    efek bayangan

    Submitted by ddum_RyuZentju on 6 January, 2011 - 14:32.

    arsiran bayangannya ga ada,

    jd gambarnya ga terlihat hidup,

    tp dari keseluruhan udah bagus kok

  • mastriono's picture

    luamayan untuk hitam putih

    Submitted by mastriono on 6 January, 2011 - 08:49.

    luamayan untuk hitam putih

  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    warna

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 2 January, 2011 - 19:15.

    komiknya sih dah bagus..cuman warna hampir semuanya putih,,,janya warna mata saja

     

    jd monoton...

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • suju05's picture

    cover

    Submitted by suju05 on 2 January, 2011 - 15:22.
    gambar sampul komiknya juga dongg, tapi your comic is awesome
  • kang dedes's picture

    idenya bagus....

    Submitted by kang dedes on 2 January, 2011 - 08:09.

    terus berkarya....

  • ddum_RyuZentju's picture

    bagus

    Submitted by ddum_RyuZentju on 31 December, 2010 - 22:39.

    udah bagus isinya,

    tp kalo menurutku kalo ga pake cover rasanya ga lengkap

  • MatinRock's picture

    Mo kasih saran...

    Submitted by MatinRock on 31 December, 2010 - 19:39.

    Aq jg bru dpt nech ilmunya,hehhehehe..

    1. Panel : Jarak panel antara atas n bwah harus lebih besar drpd yng kesamping...

    2. Balon kata : kyaknya nih komik dr kanan ke kiri ya? Jadi yg ngomong prtama kali balon katanya dsbelah kanan..

    Cobain dech, aq dah nerapin di komikq brikutnya,hehehehehe...

    Lanjuuuuut..Semangat....

     

  • destiny's picture

    Bagus

    Submitted by destiny on 31 December, 2010 - 19:29.

    Ceritanya oke, cuman gambarnya agak kacau. Semangat terus Smile

  • Januar Q Chaiianc's picture

    page 5

    Submitted by Januar Q Chaiianc on 31 December, 2010 - 17:20.

    page 5 ga ada text tuh mas, selanjutnya dr page 5 rusak mungkin uploadnya ga bner, tp sejauh ini keren jg

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