Pure - Chapter 2
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Chapter Lainnya
Cerita sejauh ini: Sebuah wabah merebak di pedalaman Kalimantan. Wabah yang mengerikan ini menular melalui cairan tubuh. Penyakit yang menyerang sistem kekebalan tubuh ini menyebabkan rusaknya antibodi, membuat tulang rapuh dan menghancurkan sumsum tulang belakang hingga menyebabkan kematian. Tim dokter dari mancanegara diterjunkan untuk menangani penyakit ini. Reon, putra dari salah satu dokter tersebut tertular penyakit misterius itu. Sang ayah yang mulai putus asa mendapatkan sebuah dokumen misterius tergeletak di mejanya. Dokumen tentang PURE, sekelompok manusia dengan helai-helai DNA murni dari Adam. PURE yang mungkin satu-satunya kunci keselamatan puteranya.. Akankah ia memburu para PURE itu? Jika ya, apa yang sebenarnya akan dihadapinya? Ayo kita simak sama-sama.. Komik ini adalah komik eksklusif, untuk membaca komik ini kamu harus menjadi anggota dan membayar 30 KP.
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untuk gambar: 1. BG mntap
Submitted by Arheef deZavent on 14 February, 2012 - 18:58.untuk gambar:
1. BG mntap bgt...
2. penggunaan tone yang tepat dan sesuai...
3. angle2 yg bervariasi membuat gmbar trasa g mono...
4. ada sbagian proporsi tubuh agak aneh...cerita:
1. kayakny agak terburu2, jadi ada detail cerita yg kayakny hilang gitu..AdZ the Blue Thunder -
penasaran pgn baca lagi...
Submitted by En_Drew on 5 February, 2012 - 13:04.penasaran pgn baca lagi...
Belajar dari sesepuh ^^ -
@hanan : anggep ajh udah di
Submitted by youlee kawai on 31 January, 2012 - 12:44.@hanan : anggep ajh udah di translete bahasanya.
keren kk sim and dama...
oh iyak jgn2 misha'a???
hmm pure itu bersih dr dosa yak???
tp kok line suka marah2?? hehe
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Yg dmaksud 30 KP apa, kak ?
Submitted by tsasa (not verified) on 28 January, 2012 - 10:52.Yg dmaksud 30 KP apa, kak ?
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keren! keren! keren!
Submitted by Rena Akine on 19 January, 2012 - 09:33.keren! keren! keren! ke~reeeeeeeeeen!!! b(>u<)d
aku akan terus menunggu sampai kapan pun! -

di kalimantan ga gini
Submitted by Hanan (not verified) on 15 January, 2012 - 21:20.di kalimantan ga gini bahasanya. Ga pake neng atau bang ^^
beda jauhh -
Lanjut y, menarik ni
Submitted by NavalArchitectu... on 5 January, 2012 - 21:05.Lanjut y, menarik ni ceritanya
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wahhh..bagus nieh komik
Submitted by leumang on 1 January, 2012 - 04:49.wahhh..bagus nieh komik nya..
nunpang oleksi ya.. Laughing
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wahhh..bagus nieh komik
Submitted by leumang on 1 January, 2012 - 04:49.wahhh..bagus nieh komik nya..
nunpang oleksi ya.. Laughing
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wahhh..bagus nieh komik
Submitted by leumang on 1 January, 2012 - 04:43.wahhh..bagus nieh komik nya..
nunpang oleksi ya..
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keliatannya bagus nih.. tp
Submitted by Blazzer on 27 December, 2011 - 13:26.keliatannya bagus nih..
tp sayang saya blum punya kp yg mencukupi.. :'(-ᮘᮣᮐ᮪ᮐᮨᮁ -
wah...semoga di kalimantan
Submitted by pelpin on 7 December, 2011 - 12:00. -
aduh penasaran nih tapi blum
Submitted by fingermanga on 7 December, 2011 - 09:27.aduh penasaran nih tapi blum punya kp
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chapter 3 nya 60kp ya??
Submitted by Tsuciruka on 1 December, 2011 - 18:03.chapter 3 nya 60kp ya?? waah,, makin penasaran sm si misha.. ditunggu kelanjutannya.. ^.^
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mantap bner artnya rapi,jd
Submitted by omaenome on 27 November, 2011 - 20:54.mantap bner artnya rapi,jd pengen ngomik lg huhu T_T
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--- diedit oleh admin.
Submitted by tamu (not verified) on 22 November, 2011 - 18:19.--- diedit oleh admin. catatan: di komikoo kalau tidak suka pada sebuah karya, berilah komentar yang membangun karya tersebut, bukan hanya menjelek-jelekkan. komentarlah yang bermutu
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AKU BINGUNG.. ada yg mbacanya
Submitted by danny_warfield on 22 November, 2011 - 10:03.AKU BINGUNG.. ada yg mbacanya dari kanan ke kiri, terus tiba tiba dari kiri ke kanan.. atau akunya yg sudah lama gak mabca komik ya?
aku yakin SNOW of ASH bisa terkenal seperti GHOST in the SHELL
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woooow. lanjutkan kk
Submitted by faathir95 on 29 October, 2011 - 13:39.woooow. lanjutkan kk
maaf saya masih amatiran -
woaaaaaaaaaaa harganya
Submitted by afifufefo on 29 October, 2011 - 10:55.woaaaaaaaaaaa
harganya naiiiik -
Baguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuus..
Submitted by Erica on 19 October, 2011 - 13:45.Baguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuus........Tapi....Kalo ntar update lagi,apa tambah mahal,KP nya? hehe...maklum,KP Q baru dikit..hiks...
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simpleline tone dan shadownya
Submitted by artharis on 17 October, 2011 - 17:50.simpleline tone dan shadownya keren...
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MASIH KURAANG
Submitted by vinna audy on 7 October, 2011 - 16:53.MASIH KURAANG

wakakakakakakakak btw makasih udah di update !!! Aku tunggu kelanjutannya !!
http://chzgifs.files.wordpress.com/2011/09/funny-gifs-bully-cat-stuffs-cat-in-box.gif
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wehhh akhirnya update juga
Submitted by noval komik on 6 October, 2011 - 09:28.wehhh
akhirnya update juga puresaya masih copo kk XD -
eaa misha kesian amat baru
Submitted by 33 san on 5 October, 2011 - 16:21. -
aiisshh!!!!!!!! efek-efeknya
Submitted by renalkyuuroku on 3 October, 2011 - 22:25.aiisshh!!!!!!!!
efek-efeknya sudah muncul!!!
apa yang terjadi dengan MISHA!!!??
semakin tidak sabar saja untuk mengupas tuntas hal sebenarnya tentang PURE!!!ditunggu lanjutannya kakak!!
tapi yang banyak
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haikkkksssssssss...kerennnn
Submitted by emonichi on 3 October, 2011 - 21:50.haikkkksssssssss...kerennnn nya...Perspektif nya bener-bener tertata bangaet ga kyak aq wakakakakaak asal-asalan haha..pokoke Manyus deh wat dama n simple...adegan nahan peluru kereeennn kayak c NEO..misha moga ga meninggal kan cute heeee
viva A.G.E. Explorer XD -
ya Allah Kereen bgt,....
Submitted by indra on 2 October, 2011 - 18:17.ya Allah Kereen bgt,.... teach me guruu
I like the GORILLAZ style.... -
eaaa namanya line dan
Submitted by RPGNoZero on 2 October, 2011 - 12:00.eaaa namanya line dan dama....
where did misha's name come from? LOL"Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..." -
wah.. ditambah pagenya..
Submitted by garuda on 2 October, 2011 - 11:57.wah.. ditambah pagenya.. mantaf ni gurusim.. ayoo semangat..
" aku mungkin tak seUnyu yang kalian pikirkan.. " - pak Dullah, 1967 - 2010 - -
woogh, biarin mahal, kan nih
Submitted by indra on 22 September, 2011 - 09:44.woogh, biarin mahal, kan nih komik ter Keren,.... Mantap Guru, Ajarin doonk,...
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aduhh kenapa aq bisa kelewat
Submitted by emonichi on 13 September, 2011 - 22:41.aduhh kenapa aq bisa kelewat ya PURE ch2?? aduhh kacau neh hehehe
hohoho..btw seneng banget liat flownya.beda kalo TIM ya..mantep punya haikksssssviva A.G.E. Explorer XD -
thank you roel san
Submitted by simpleline on 7 September, 2011 - 00:36.thank you roel san
~there is no such thing as friend~ -
nambahin link: penggundulan
Submitted by roelworks on 6 September, 2011 - 22:41.nambahin link:

penggundulan hutan di kalimantan ...bisa buat nambah2 infor setting
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line...bacanya lain ya... ?
Submitted by roelworks on 3 September, 2011 - 04:46.line...bacanya lain ya... ? jadi inget serial experimental lain (anime) heheh tapi tokohnya cewek...lanjut gan! Kape gue langsung abis baca 8 halaman T_T
setelah baca komen orang2 kayaknya emang bahasa jadi butir penting, ya ...perlu diingat komik nggak gambar saja, tata bahasa merupakan komponen pendukung menyatunya sebuah cerita komik...karena dialog tidak kedengeran suaranya (tidak seperti film dimana orang jawa tinggal di bikin medok sahaja), pemilihan kata yang tepat sangat mendukung karakterisasi dan memperkenalkan suasana atau lokasi (apa ya bahasa indonesianya - setting)...simple but important (hence the name simpleline) don't over simplify it..but also don't make it too complicated
just my two cent gambar ay mah juga gak keren ...jadi .... tinggal kebesaran hati para komikus tercinta
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nuansanya jadi beda ya dari
Submitted by Adiaz Airtif on 30 August, 2011 - 05:22.nuansanya jadi beda ya dari chap. 1, chap. 1 rasanya lebih kerasa suasananya dibanding chap.2 ini rada kurang gara2 ada miss yang mencolok digambar tapi masih kerasa kok :B klo soal miss digambar seh daku bisa maklumin aja toh gak ada yang sempurna didunia ini *lagian gambar daku juga masih cetek =w=" jadi merasa gak pantas ngungkit2 miss digambar*
daku tinggal di borneo dan wong borneo asli
biasanya seh klo panggil penjual dengan sebutan "paman (25 keatas)" atau "om (umur 18 keatas)" :B klo buat pembelinya wanita dipanggil "ading/ding/dek " atau "mbak"btw ditunggu lanjutannya xD
* hanya di komikoo lah daku temukan kritikan yang daku butuhkan
so give me more critic~~~~ mental daku kuat kok
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http://komikoo.com/komik/dike
Submitted by faathir95 on 29 August, 2011 - 08:02.http://komikoo.com/komik/dikelas-gak-ada-yang-beres-0
maaf saya masih amatiran -
sial mahal abis =3= . oke de
Submitted by Syahinaz Recca ... on 27 August, 2011 - 22:09.sial mahal abis =3= . oke de gpp
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coez san.... the car used is
Submitted by simpleline on 16 August, 2011 - 10:31.coez san.... the car used is actually rangerover evoque, you can google it.. it only available in automatic transmission using rotational button (like in jaguar) not traditional shifter stick... the year of the story is 2015, by that year rangerover evoque is already considered as an old car

and yes we still need to learn a lot... thanks coez san
and this one is chapter 2...
chapter 1 is here : http://komikoo.com/komik/purethanks again all
~there is no such thing as friend~ -
woow boz, so this is the
Submitted by Er Coez on 16 August, 2011 - 09:29.woow boz, so this is the Story... PURE
but I find a little miss here, I think..??
1.pas panel dr, Charles di mobil tangannya agak aneh , persenelingnya pindah di kanan boz..? wkwk biasanya c gtu kanan pegang stir kiri transmisi wkwkwk.
2. persfektif kampak yg di bawa dokter agak lebih besar sama dokternya kyaknya c..
sekian kripik dan sarang waletnya wkwk
overall nice work boz , btw ini masih 1 chapterkan..?silahkan kripik dan sarang madunya http://ercoez.deviantart.com kripik dan sarang anda membuat kami ada -
Kok perasaan chapter 2 ini
Submitted by njomany on 8 August, 2011 - 21:04.Kok perasaan chapter 2 ini agak kemahalan yah. 30 KP untuk 8 halaman versus chapter 1 yang 14 halaman tapi cuma 15 KP:)
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Waah, ternyata tokoh di
Submitted by sagtavilia on 7 August, 2011 - 20:05.Waah, ternyata tokoh di prolog itu bukan tokoh utama, tapi mereka ya...? Emang klo kaya yg lain bilang sih ga berasa, tapi brhubung ini masih awal cerita dan bakal berat ceritanya, masih wajar...
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thanks for the comment
Submitted by simpleline on 7 August, 2011 - 14:55.thanks for the comment prekotok... i imagine if i use english language for the dialog then you're gonna say "superweird" because no one in borneo is using english then.... thanks so much for the comment, we hope we can improve
~there is no such thing as friend~ -
oke...gambar udah
Submitted by prekotok on 7 August, 2011 - 13:54.oke...gambar udah bagus...cuman ada yg sedikit mengganjal nih menurut saya juga...
ane notice settingnya di borneo/kalimantan...tapi kok ada penggunaan kata2 "neng" ama "bang"?
this is borneo, i mean di kalimantan tidak pernah ada kata2 seperti itu...kalaupun ada, sangat jarang sekali...karena saya jg tinggal di kalimantan:) -
ah yea yea.. i wonder what
Submitted by Crow on 5 August, 2011 - 20:26.ah yea yea.. i wonder what did that random passerby means...well well do the best be the best.. nice nice..and good luck good luck.
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Keren artnya. Improved dari
Submitted by 33 san on 5 August, 2011 - 20:23.Keren artnya. Improved dari chapter 1. And a little bit rushed. I mean...who is Misha? who is the girl? PURE too? Si cowok -- apakah dia tokoh utama? Disini storytellingnya agak patah terutama pas abangnya masak mie tuh. Para karakter utama tidak diberi kesempatan mengenalkan diri dan kena spotlight. Kenyataan bahwa mereka PURE tak begitu berasa. Kecuali kalau 2muda mudi ini (Atau si ayah psycho itu) adalah karakter numpang lewat...Ah oh well, let's wait for another next chapter shall we ?

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MANTAAAB di gambar, ga usah
Submitted by RPGNoZero on 5 August, 2011 - 18:52.MANTAAAB di gambar, ga usah komen deh. Biarkan para pro aja yg komen kalo soal gambar...
Soal cerita nih... gw jujur komen sama kaya yg di bawah...
tidak terasanya kalo dia tokoh utama ato apa blablabla, dan soal si bapa(lupa namanya) yang bikin kita tw kalo si cowo itu PureYah, kalo emang kaya Naoki, saya tunggu... 20th Century Boys juga awalnya mesti sabar banget... tp setidaknya dia sudah menunjukkan "sahabat" di akhir chapter 2...
Komik2 sekarang.... emang pembaca biasanay sudah minta hal2 yg menegangkan hati dr chapter" awal kebanyakan...+lagi, bayaran yg semakin mahal... 30KP...
bahkan saya ngerasa chapter1 sama 2nya masih bisa digabung....saya tunggu yg berikutnya!!!!!!
MAJU TERUS KOMIK INDO!!!!
"Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..." -
Wow what a comment by
Submitted by administrator on 5 August, 2011 - 16:41.Wow what a comment by gianeka... this is what komikoo is all about, a direct communication between comic author and the reader... thank you for your comment, we will do better next time

keep the spirit guys!we come in peace -
thanks guys for your
Submitted by simpleline on 5 August, 2011 - 15:46.thanks guys for your comments!!!
we'll try to be better... thanks thanks!~there is no such thing as friend~ -
Hello Crow here.. Simpleline
Submitted by Crow on 5 August, 2011 - 15:37.Hello Crow here.. Simpleline san, Dama san, Kraken san, you can do better than this, a lot better, a whole lot better, you know what i mean. you are a great artists with so many potential and sense, people are praising you for how great you are, how nice you can be, and how generous you are and have been. You are a great man and women, and you wrote this story with pride, stand high and strong, believe that you will change the history and ..you DID! everyone amazed by you, and they talk about how great you are, you were, you have been and will be.. but a random boy with torny hope comes closer, and like he already knew everything he said...random passerby wrote:
This chapter, i mean the whole chapter so far, it's .. it's just something that is not you, not Dama san, not someone who always said "this should like this and bla bla bla and like that!" You should know better, pace, panels, drawing, situation, comprehension, and such. This is 30 KP we paid and 45 KP total! new member would need to post something and said random comments to read this, this very comic of yours! So what should i say now? you are great? you are the best? i can say that, i want to say that, but i don't know why i can't! i can't help myself when it comes to praise, maybe i am just a goddamn kid after all.
This one, this 'PURE' should be the comic people are waiting in excitement right? It might be just my preference over comic style or manga style or some crap that i don't want to discuss about, but i find this one less interesting, even to tell you the truth, i want to read it more, maybe there is something that binds me to this 'PURE'. I don't know about the drawing, people said good i said it's average, people said the story is good, is great, i don't know why i can't say that this time. Maybe it was too much or too great it blind my eye to see how great it was..For me personally Dead maze has something a little more interesting than the last 22 pages i read, you know, 22 pages...22 pages!"and when i talked about Dead Maze i mean that Dead Maze"
I don't know simpleline san, but maybe this is good already,. maybe it's just me, but if this is a professional world, when people are judging by it's coverwe are not talking fellow artists here, we are talking some random reader who know only how to enjoy and spit harsh words *like me* and they construct most of the societythis comic might be ...well something that they read because it is free and only if they are your friend *no buy. Start from the drawing, i don't know, it's okay.. fine tones, and stuff.. and stuff, they are nice fine, not everyone capable to draw something like that.
"ah looks like a lot of people are agree with me"Kids would be amazed by this, maybe deeply amazed, but for more experienced reader? they arei thinknot, the plot is about someone who want to save another one who is precious to him right? While the hero is the only one who can save him, sacrificing himself for him right? That's.. just, i don't know. but you know, if in the future you can not make something that is great as the turning point of view, i might big underscore here "I" just disappointed on how you develop this story, as i already have. Since for a 22 pages only to show this, this is not really something, i really really hope for a bigger improvement in the future.
"...and...and..."
Since the first chapter, i feel there something that is just not right, the prologue seems a bit strange, and for mefor methey .. just..*man how should i put this, not yet, and then the development they are just too plain, no shocking truth, no heart breaking moment, no.. nothing like that, and in this last chapter, i am getting more and more curious about how hard you did with this chapter, did you eat? Because i feel like someone randomly write this chapter and 'voila' it's done! Did you sleep? because i feel like somebody miss-write the story! Did you have fun? Here we go, did you love what you had done? Something is missing, i can feel the love, but i can't feel the affection, i can not see there is something that would bind me hard to this comic, i just feel like "hey read me..come here and read me"..maybe because it is nicely told? So i can follow the story nicely? I DON'T KNOW SIMPLELINE SAN!!! I can't stand myself this time, i don't know what to say, i want to say this is good. I really really want to say that, i want to praise you and Dama san, i want you guys keep smiling without even thinking that i have this kind feeling. I want to do that, smile like everyone and talk about how great this might be, how nice and how wonderful what you guys did.. i want.. i really really want .. but my chest burns everytime i want to say that.. my head feels heavy, it's over some random comment i wrote myself but it's really burden me. I can't tell you the truth, but i can't hide it because it is you, the one who teached me all this time, scold me, praise me. I want to repay that kindness but i don't know, i want to support you but i don't know how to do that and if i were to know that, i don't know if i were to help you nor i can, and this time, this story like a big shock for me, "Is this Simpleline san and Dama san?" i keep denying that i am disappointed but my heart keep holding me, i keep disappointing for some random reasons i don't know about. Drawing? I expect a whole lot better, nicer, it doesn't have to be complicated and complex, it's just need to be 'able to tell the story' right? Story? I expect a big shock with a big smile, tears and sadness, something that play my mind and inspire me, that's what i expect from you guys. That's what i want this 'PURE' turns out to be. I want to laugh and think this thinking as jokes but i can't. This time, maybe i expect too much, or maybe this is just my preference over something selfish. it's just me. Anyway nice nice..and good luck, *i should have said that in the first place.I am not person worthy of your concern -
sekarang komen dari
Submitted by Hex on 5 August, 2011 - 13:35.sekarang komen dari saya...
dari gambar udah jelas MANTAB banget sama pemakaian tonenya pas, kalo dari segi cerita saya sih g terlalu ahli buat ngomentar cerita jadi g ada komen buat cerita dan udah aye anggap bagus (MANTAB)
ok itu saja cerita selanjutnya oe tunggu, penasaran banget sih wakakakak MANTAB! HEKIM!! -
masih keren. saya belum bisa
Submitted by irzaqi on 5 August, 2011 - 13:14.masih keren.
saya belum bisa ngomong banyak karena jumlah halamannya masih sedikit. terlalu cepat kalau saya menilai alur penceritaan sekarang.
yang jelas, saya masih nyaman membacanya. dan itu sudah cukup. mari kita tunggu episode berikutnya
I AM IMMORTAL! -
ok gw mau komentar... soal
Submitted by shinji no ai on 5 August, 2011 - 12:47.ok gw mau komentar...
soal gambar udah ga usah di komen deh *gw ga bisa gmbar juga soalnya*
gw msih bisa nangkep sih soal si 3 orang ini tapi ternyata cuma ada 1 pure yaitu si cowo? *itu taunya karna di akhir di kasih tau ama si dokter* namun gw ngerasa kejanggalan tata bahasa si line di panel2 awal apa emang dia logatnya aneh gitu *ga tau juga gw kenal juga enggak*....
trus soal misha gw setuju ada 33 san kayaknya kurang mendalam dan tergesa gesa...dan kejadian ke kejadian seperti kurang natural gitu gimana yaa apa karna alur dipercepat *apa mata gw yang kecepetan* gw tunggu selanjutnya men
LANJUTGAN GANBATTE! jangan kelamaan di upload men gw penasaran,,,MUSIC and ART is the Best FUSION!














































































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