Proloque - E.Y.E.S

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Eranya Para Perompak Angkasa!

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  • faathir95's picture

    wow bagus banget gambarnya kk

    wow bagus banget gambarnya kk Laughing out loud

    maaf saya masih amatiran
  • rhaditsusama's picture

    wah makasih kk T_T pasti the

    wah makasih kk T_T pasti the next chapter bakal bikin lebih yang sesuatu banget ^^

    My EYES will watch yours all over the sky...!
  • Damantine's picture

    eaaaaaaaaaaa.. asekkk kakakk

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    eaaaaaaaaaaa.. asekkk kakakk cerritanya UHUK T___T masih harus belajar untuk2 yang ini Laughing out loud terus berkarya kakak Laughing out loud GANBATTE~~

    Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~
  • indra's picture

    OMG its so COOL OMGG

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    OMG its so COOL OMGG Shock

    I like MOJOKERSZ
  • Crow's picture

    wonderful, i love the story

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    wonderful, i love the story so, good luck for the next chapter, good luck

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • rhaditsusama's picture

    of course it would end just

    of course it would end just like that... i'm done with creating name for chapter2 but maybe just make some times because something else... just wait till the second one release okay ^^

    My EYES will watch yours all over the sky...!
  • Crow's picture

    hey hey, did not i tell you

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    hey hey, did not i tell you that this one's wonderful? make sure to write the chapter 2 all right? it's a waste to make only a chapter of this wonderful story, bit by bit, you can be one of the best, just make sure not to give up all right. good luck

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • simpleline's picture

    eh?this is pretty good, full

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    eh?this is pretty good, full fantasy genre was considered the most difficult story to build...so far it's interesting, too much text and sissy dialog, the flow is a bit jumpy from now and then, pacing is fast i have slight difficulty enjoying it....the originality is so far just okay, i can see some influence of ff9, ff7, and many other title there, but it's okay, not a bad thing at all...the drawing is good but can be better...i think you're gonna be okay, you have the talent, just need to develop it more, listen to the positive input and stay away from the bad ones... great! looking forward to the next chapter then...
    =3=

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • rhaditsusama's picture

    yup... i have problem with

    yup... i have problem with saving its file, the toning become so annoying, and totally diferent with the MS

    My EYES will watch yours all over the sky...!
  • rhaditsusama's picture

    makasih bwt

    makasih bwt komentarnya...
    iya untuk halaman2 terakhir toningnya jadi makin halus. soalnya improvement makin lama sih... hehehe... untuk toning ane pake software Manga Studio, jadi untuk halaman awal memang saat itu masih belum mahir... hehehe

    as for bagcround i'm really have some serious matter with background and now i'm still going to perfectly it... honestly i hate with this bagcround because is far away from my mind... on next chapter i'll make a batter one...

    My EYES will watch yours all over the sky...!
  • Date Sin's picture

    this is nice buddy, maybe u

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    this is nice buddy,
    maybe u had a problem with the backgound ^^

    Keep learning with trying it. Smile
  • Crow's picture

    Maybe because the resolution

    Maybe because the resolution issue?

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • nebulanikkei11's picture

    wkwkwk............. MCR... ^^

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    wkwkwk............. MCR... ^^
    bagus kk...
    lanjutkan!!! XD

    no, no, no....
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    haha mantaaab... kenapa

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    haha mantaaab...
    kenapa kayany halaman akhir2 jadi halus?
    ditunggu chapter berikutnya!!!

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • ethzkillz's picture

    bagus,, tp koq tiba" d

    bagus,,
    tp koq tiba" d halaman terakhir jadi halus yah..

  • Crow's picture

    no other words but wonderful!

    no other words but wonderful! Kinda reming me of Night Fang, what is Night Fang? it's is one of the best comic i've ever made, the story is wonderful and i love adventure, Rhadit senpai you are the third person from local artists who could deliver such manga feeling into me, i can see a whole lot improvement here and there, and if the drawing were better, you might be one of the best writer, that's wonderful, Sky island, sky pirates, sky sky sky.. and the E.Y.E.S i can see this whole story goes, good luck for the next chapter, this is wonderful... you have a great sense senpai, wonderful

    I am not person worthy of your concern

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