Proloque - E.Y.E.S
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wow bagus banget gambarnya kk
Submitted by faathir95 on 27 November, 2011 - 11:00.wow bagus banget gambarnya kk
maaf saya masih amatiran -
wah makasih kk T_T pasti the
Submitted by rhaditsusama on 25 November, 2011 - 20:55.wah makasih kk T_T pasti the next chapter bakal bikin lebih yang sesuatu banget ^^
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eaaaaaaaaaaa.. asekkk kakakk
Submitted by Damantine on 25 November, 2011 - 02:08.eaaaaaaaaaaa.. asekkk kakakk cerritanya UHUK T___T masih harus belajar untuk2 yang ini
terus berkarya kakak
GANBATTE~~Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~ -
OMG its so COOL OMGG
Submitted by indra on 24 November, 2011 - 19:03.OMG its so COOL OMGG
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wonderful, i love the story
Submitted by Crow on 24 November, 2011 - 19:00.wonderful, i love the story so, good luck for the next chapter, good luck
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of course it would end just
Submitted by rhaditsusama on 7 November, 2011 - 23:25.of course it would end just like that... i'm done with creating name for chapter2 but maybe just make some times because something else... just wait till the second one release okay ^^
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hey hey, did not i tell you
Submitted by Crow on 7 November, 2011 - 20:24.hey hey, did not i tell you that this one's wonderful? make sure to write the chapter 2 all right? it's a waste to make only a chapter of this wonderful story, bit by bit, you can be one of the best, just make sure not to give up all right. good luck
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eh?this is pretty good, full
Submitted by simpleline on 20 October, 2011 - 21:13.eh?this is pretty good, full fantasy genre was considered the most difficult story to build...so far it's interesting, too much text and sissy dialog, the flow is a bit jumpy from now and then, pacing is fast i have slight difficulty enjoying it....the originality is so far just okay, i can see some influence of ff9, ff7, and many other title there, but it's okay, not a bad thing at all...the drawing is good but can be better...i think you're gonna be okay, you have the talent, just need to develop it more, listen to the positive input and stay away from the bad ones... great! looking forward to the next chapter then...
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yup... i have problem with
Submitted by rhaditsusama on 19 October, 2011 - 10:04.yup... i have problem with saving its file, the toning become so annoying, and totally diferent with the MS
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makasih bwt
Submitted by rhaditsusama on 19 October, 2011 - 09:57.makasih bwt komentarnya...
iya untuk halaman2 terakhir toningnya jadi makin halus. soalnya improvement makin lama sih... hehehe... untuk toning ane pake software Manga Studio, jadi untuk halaman awal memang saat itu masih belum mahir... heheheas for bagcround i'm really have some serious matter with background and now i'm still going to perfectly it... honestly i hate with this bagcround because is far away from my mind... on next chapter i'll make a batter one...
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this is nice buddy, maybe u
Submitted by Date Sin on 19 October, 2011 - 09:40.this is nice buddy,
maybe u had a problem with the backgound ^^Keep learning with trying it.
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Maybe because the resolution
Submitted by Crow on 14 October, 2011 - 19:35.Maybe because the resolution issue?
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wkwkwk............. MCR... ^^
Submitted by nebulanikkei11 on 14 October, 2011 - 19:19.wkwkwk............. MCR... ^^
bagus kk...
lanjutkan!!! XDno, no, no.... -
haha mantaaab... kenapa
Submitted by RPGNoZero on 14 October, 2011 - 17:38.haha mantaaab...
kenapa kayany halaman akhir2 jadi halus?
ditunggu chapter berikutnya!!!"Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..." -
bagus,, tp koq tiba" d
Submitted by ethzkillz on 14 October, 2011 - 15:49.bagus,,
tp koq tiba" d halaman terakhir jadi halus yah.. -
no other words but wonderful!
Submitted by Crow on 14 October, 2011 - 09:57.no other words but wonderful! Kinda reming me of Night Fang, what is Night Fang? it's is one of the best comic i've ever made, the story is wonderful and i love adventure, Rhadit senpai you are the third person from local artists who could deliver such manga feeling into me, i can see a whole lot improvement here and there, and if the drawing were better, you might be one of the best writer, that's wonderful, Sky island, sky pirates, sky sky sky.. and the E.Y.E.S i can see this whole story goes, good luck for the next chapter, this is wonderful... you have a great sense senpai, wonderful
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