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PRAHARA BERDARAH (BAB I)

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Tahun 1831.Pulau Jawa dalam situasi mengenaskan. Pribumi dipaksa untuk melakukan tanam paksa (cultuur stelsel). Korupsi di daerah merajalela.Pemerintah Pusat Hindia di batavia memerintahkan Perwira Jan Speelman yg kejam untuk memeriksa adanya dugaan korupsi "harta dari situs Ciwaru" di daerah Cikalong. Keberangkatan Jan tersebut menimbulkan prahara, karena dia berhadapan dengan seorang jawara eks veteran Perang Jawa.Bentrokan tak terhindarkan, memakan korban jiwa yang begitu banyak, menimbulkan PRAHARA BERDARAH! Sebagai pelengkap, aku sisipkan juga link film animasiku tentang Pencak Silat : http://yansetiawan.deviantart.com/gallery/26188892#/d2xwj0z      ( SEMOGA BERKENAN!!!)
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  • tamu's picture

    sip...

    Submitted by tamu (not verified) on 11 January, 2012 - 01:31.
    2

    sip...

  • Dudy Subagdja's picture

    joooooooooooooosssssss......!

    Submitted by Dudy Subagdja on 13 December, 2011 - 13:09.
    5

    joooooooooooooosssssss......!!! gebetan keren komik ciamik Laughing out loud

    "Unfolds wing...hunddles up word !!!file:///D:/Pelpinz/chupu%20Silvy/frofile%202.jpg
  • pelpin's picture

    woah amazing

    Submitted by pelpin on 23 November, 2011 - 20:04.

    woah amazing

    "Giving wings to freedom"
  • yuya_indou's picture

    gambarnya bagus.... enak

    Submitted by yuya_indou on 25 May, 2011 - 14:52.
    4

    gambarnya bagus....

    enak dibaca walau settingnya jadul.. lanjut...

    komik karya saya juga ada di http://indocomics.blogspot.com
  • yanst's picture

    so much thanks

    Submitted by yanst on 29 March, 2011 - 18:33.

    hehee ... chill out my friend, ... I am very pleased with your comment ... I mean just showed so much taste and choice..i'll always waiting and open for comment...

  • Crow's picture

    i see, this kind of drawing

    Submitted by Crow on 29 March, 2011 - 16:58.

    i see, this kind of drawing is remind me of something that i read a long time ago in a now-already-ended magazine, iforgot the title tough,

    sorry if i were anoyying by talking like that, i just tried to be honest and if that was really annoying...i'll stop.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • yanst's picture

    taste for comic

    Submitted by yanst on 29 March, 2011 - 07:23.

    Thank you Gianeka. Taste for art is a choice. Some like the model pictures like this (line, color, shadow), some are not liked. Some Friends comic artists abroad (U.S., Netherlands, Germany) like this style because it reminds the style of 60's retrospective, which is now rarely found. Instead they asked to translate in English, ... really a new challenge!

  • Crow's picture

    that was fun, but the art,

    Submitted by Crow on 28 March, 2011 - 18:04.
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    that was fun,
    but the art, there is something messy there, the line too..
    and there is some panels where the background should be drawn too...
    looking forward for your next project

    and i think that would be great for black and white comic rather than like this

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • yanst's picture

    Cerita

    Submitted by yanst on 26 March, 2011 - 14:48.

    Tsubasa@ wahh,makasih banget, moga cerita lainnya diikuti...
    Kiky@ makasih Ky,...baca2nya serius tapi santai aja,hehe
    Alisnaik@ Sengaja alur ceritanya dibuka sedikit2 biar penasaran,hehe takut spoiler!, ntar bab selanjutnya semakin
    jelas alur n sebab akibatnya, see for the next cahpter!

  • tsubasa's picture

    tajub...

    Submitted by tsubasa on 26 March, 2011 - 12:17.
    5

    saya baru join ke komikoo...dan yang pertama saya liat komik ini...
    takjubbb...!!! Shock

    hebat

  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    waktu

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 26 March, 2011 - 11:31.
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    kom yanst yang terhormat....
    sepertinya saya butuh waktu dulu untuk memahami isi cerita ini,,,,nanti hasil observasinya saya lanjutkan

    fontnya cocok,,dan artnya itu super pointer .... Laughing out loud

    tunggu lanjutan komentar ku ya,,,coz baca nya agak susah juga nih koneksi -_-

    keep on move... Laughing out loud

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • alisnaik's picture

    sejarah

    Submitted by alisnaik on 26 March, 2011 - 01:06.
    5

    sebenarnya saya bukanlah penikmat sejarah.
    jadi awal-awalnya agak berat untuk mencerna konten cerita.

    tapi semakin dibaca semakin menarik.
    setidaknya menambah wawasan saya yg dulu nya payah dalam pelajaran sejarah waktu saya jaman SMP dan SMA.

    adegan perkelahiannya udah hidup.
    dan pewarnaan di sini menjadi penguat suasana Beer

    ditunggu lanjutannya. nice job, dude.

    terima kasih dan mohon maaf =)
  • yanst's picture

    Sippp

    Submitted by yanst on 23 March, 2011 - 15:43.

    Thanks....see for the next chapter!

  • roelworks's picture

    nambahin lagi yua....

    Submitted by roelworks on 23 March, 2011 - 15:25.

    Ynast said: Yapp,gambar Diponegoro termasuk reference juga, termasuk marsose nya..

    Sayangnya Marsose baru ada setelah 1890 Tongue dan karena Yanst nyebutin tahun alangkah baiknya jika tepat penggambarannya.
    referensi:
    http://sejarah.kompasiana.com/2010/10/23/marsose-oh-marsose/
    http://ristadiwidodo.blogspot.com/2008/09/korps-marechaussee-pasukan-khu...

    Marsose setahu saya memang pasukan khusus untuk perang Aceh Laughing out loud

    Perang Diponegoro cukup devide et Impera dan tipu-tipu...

    Tanpa merendahkan Man dan Djair, jamannya menyerahkan kepada pembaca sudah lewat. You need to establish the environment. Mau contoh? COba nonton extended version dari Lord of the Rings, nonton the makingnya...serius stuff, saya tahu yanst cuman sendiri, but if you want to exceed Man dan Djair.. you have to be more than them not just like them

  • yanst's picture

    thanks

    Submitted by yanst on 23 March, 2011 - 14:01.

    Tnaks reference nya...NTu pengarang udah patron pujaanku,hehee..Yapp,gambar Diponegoro termasuk reference juga, termasuk marsose nya...di beberapa komik Djair,Man,ada jg cuma mereka ga pernah menyebutkan taun berapa, jadi menyerahkan ke pembaca. Ntar di kembangkan di chapter berikutnya. Soal darah? hehe..malu2 nih bikin darah,ntar takut di cap gore..jg.Tapi emang sih mending berdarah2 aja,karena berjuang pasti ada darah.Hehe..
    Liat ntar chapter dua nya yaaa..lebih Indonesia lagi...sip sipp!
    Sebenarnya komik ini lebih bersifat "menyindir" korupsi yg udah mendarah daging sjak duluuu...jadi tekanan pesannya kesana,risalah korupsi kayak gini memang seperti itulah adanya jaman dulu.

  • roelworks's picture

    mantap

    Submitted by roelworks on 23 March, 2011 - 13:16.
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    sip...

    darahnya tanggung...pake brush ya? pake pen aja sekalian...item gak papa

    suka baca silat karya Man atau Djair? seru juga buat referensi.

    tentara londonya, mirip marsose yang time linenya agak maju ...coba riset lagi seragamnya...cultuur stelsel itu imbas dari perang Jawa (Diponegore 1825-1830) dan perang Padri juga perang lawan Belgia disana yang bikin belanda bangkrut
    (nyontek dari sini http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cultivation_System>

    ini ada contoh lukisan penangkapan diponegoro
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Nicolaas_Pieneman_-_The_Submission_of_...

    satu lagi contoh tentara belanda tahun 1846
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Het_zevende_bataljon_tot_de_aanval_opr...

    oh ya tentara Belanda disebut KNIL
    ini ada wikipedianya cuma dalam bahas abelanda tapi gambarnya cukup bisa jadi referensi:
    http://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koninklijk_Nederlandsch-Indisch_Leger

    kalau browsing kata KNIl di google pictures nanti ada gambar seragam tentara belanda tapi kecil banget...

    sori cuman bisa bawel doang Laughing out loud oh ya saya udah watch deviantartnya...

  • yanst's picture

    konsisten

    Submitted by yanst on 23 March, 2011 - 12:25.
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    Thanks all buat semua apresiasinya.Aq konsisten mo update ni comic per chapter per tiga minggu...soalnya naskah n teksnya udah kelar sampe tamat...tinggal bikin komiknya ajaaaa...

  • wysanggeny's picture

    BERKARAKTER!

    Submitted by wysanggeny on 23 March, 2011 - 05:45.
    5

    satu kata: berkarakter.
    salut! d-.-

    onegaishimasu.
  • administrator's picture

    Wuoooohh!! penasaran nih!!

    Submitted by administrator on 22 March, 2011 - 20:42.
    5

    Wuoooohh!! penasaran nih!! kapan dilanjutkan bung yanst? Smile Gambarnya khas banget, bagus bangett!!

    we come in peace
  • Damantine's picture

    mantep abizzz...^^~

    Submitted by Damantine on 22 March, 2011 - 20:32.
    5

    suasana, story dan warna bercampur aduk membuat nih komik makin mantap ^^~ TEruskan ^^~

    Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~
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