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Ini adalah cerita saya dan teman saya saat lomba pramuka. Daripada gak dikemana-manain mending di unjuk gigi. Hahahahaha, duh sori banget jelek. waktunya cuma 1 jam buat ngebikin ini. Heheheheh.

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  • Crow's picture

    maybe the coloring is kinda

    Submitted by Crow on 29 April, 2011 - 09:27.
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    maybe the coloring is kinda make it messy, agree with Boam san tough

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • boam's picture

    penempatan balon kata

    Submitted by boam on 22 January, 2011 - 23:40.

    di panel satu, dua dan tiga... penempatan balon kata nya tidak sesuai, pembaca yang tidak terbiasa membaca komik akan membnci komik karena kterbacaanya yang seperti ini,

    antara man yang harus pertama di ucapkan , biasakan taro di balon kata paling atas...

    lalu jawaban dari balon kata pertama tersebut barada di bawahnya (ini di dalam satu panel ada percakapan)

    semoga bermanfaat,

    terus berkreasi... dan terus perbiaki kualitas nya..

    nice job bro!!

    "As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be
  • Crow's picture

    nice picture you

    Submitted by Crow on 17 January, 2011 - 22:25.

    nice picture you had................

    some part of your art is very nice ...

    and i think you should make some more

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    cover

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 5 January, 2011 - 09:36.

    kom,,kasih covernya dong..

    biar tambah menarik

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • mastriono's picture

    suka gambar ya

    Submitted by mastriono on 5 January, 2011 - 09:30.

    suka gambar ya

  • vendi2012's picture

    Wah, idnya bagus nih...Tapi,

    Submitted by vendi2012 on 2 January, 2011 - 16:48.

    Wah, idnya bagus nih...Tapi, lain kali gambarnya diperjelas lagi ya...

  • nanto's picture

    good if

    Submitted by nanto on 20 December, 2010 - 11:02.
    2

    aku cinta angklung..

    gambarnya diperjelas lagi lebih asoy den,oke?

  • enjisapi's picture

    Bagus, ada pesennya :)

    Submitted by enjisapi on 20 December, 2010 - 09:57.
    2

    Bagus, ada pesennya Smile Pramuka2nya ganteng, tapi agak susah dibedain satu sama lainnya. Heee... ^^V trus agak kurang jelas juga teksnya. 

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • iqbalbaskara's picture

    pesannya keren. btw, udah tau

    Submitted by iqbalbaskara on 19 December, 2010 - 10:20.
    3

    pesannya keren. btw, udah tau ada komunitas angklung is indonesia belum? kalau belum mau dikenalin? siapa tau bisa sinergi kerjasama bikin komik tentang angklung Laughing out loud

  • MatinRock's picture

    Hmmm...

    Submitted by MatinRock on 19 December, 2010 - 09:10.
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    Ditinta dlu ya sblum dscan (kritikan buat komik prtma yang aq upload,he3)....Cz textnya ssh dbca nech...

    Lanjutkan

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