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A Dream Of A Family...

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Another Submission For KEluarga - June Theme Of Komikoo....  At Least... There is one thing i wish you could fulfill A Dream, Un Unfulfilled Dream Of A Girl.... To Have A Family....

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  • faathir95's picture

    hehe saya gak ngerti komik kk

    Submitted by faathir95 on 15 December, 2011 - 15:15.
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    hehe saya gak ngerti komik kk karna berbahasa inggris sm alurnya gak jelas Smile
    kasar amat ya, say muat komen singkat gitu karna saya males ngomen panjang2

    iya komik saya jelek, cupu, jauh banget dari komikmu. puas ? hehehe

    maaf saya masih amatiran
  • pelpin's picture

    aku suka dgn

    Submitted by pelpin on 6 December, 2011 - 13:12.

    aku suka dgn kata2nya...terlihat sgt indah...

    "Giving wings to freedom"
  • pelpin's picture

    nice

    Submitted by pelpin on 6 December, 2011 - 13:08.

    nice

    "Giving wings to freedom"
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    @faathir95 kalo ga ngerti...

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 17 September, 2011 - 07:53.
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    @faathir95 kalo ga ngerti... COBA KASIH USUL APA KEK! APA YG BIKIN GA JELAS!??!
    ENAK BNAHGET LO CUMA KOMEN KAYA GITU, NICE TRY TERUS NINGGALIN!!!

    COBA LIAT KOMIK LO SENDIRI DULU, CIH.

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • faathir95's picture

    saya gak ngerti apa maksud

    Submitted by faathir95 on 16 September, 2011 - 16:32.

    saya gak ngerti apa maksud komik ini Laughing out loud
    nice try

    maaf saya masih amatiran
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    @Adiaz OK2 thx.... baca

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 23 August, 2011 - 19:26.
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    @Adiaz OK2 thx.... baca komik2 oe yg lain juga yach!

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • Adiaz Airtif's picture

    sangat menyentuh TwT

    Submitted by Adiaz Airtif on 23 August, 2011 - 07:17.
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    sangat menyentuh TwT

    * hanya di komikoo lah daku temukan kritikan yang daku butuhkan Laughing out loud so give me more critic~~~~ mental daku kuat kok Laughing out loud *
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    haha, makanya we, upload

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 27 June, 2011 - 16:34.
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    haha, makanya we, upload disini biar org2 bisa mengoreksi kesalahan lo...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • natsume1st's picture

    wah rpg ... sperti biasa ray

    Submitted by natsume1st on 27 June, 2011 - 01:52.
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    wah rpg ... sperti biasa ray ... kesalahan lo ma gw gk jauh beda di bagian gambar > o <" bahahhaa ! *note: gw KW

    Just want to learn and love what i do ...
  • simpleline's picture

    you're funny komikers dude...

    Submitted by simpleline on 25 June, 2011 - 15:32.
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    you're funny komikers dude... and you're only commenting on rpg san's work.. .nice and funny Smile join komikoo, ok

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • komikers!!'s picture

    Efek gaambarnya dahsyaat!!!

    Submitted by komikers!! (not verified) on 25 June, 2011 - 14:17.
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    Efek gaambarnya dahsyaat!!! Walopun aga lebay sih...

    Ceritany hmmm... Karena ga dihjelasin, jadi mesti mikir sendiri deh...
    Cewe yg pink itu siapa? Bkn anakny ya?
    Apa si cewe putih itu mati hamil? Ato mati sebelum sempet bkn anak?

  • Damantine's picture

    SEMANGATTTTTTTTTTTTT

    Submitted by Damantine on 23 June, 2011 - 11:59.

    SEMANGATTTTTTTTTTTTT Laughing out loud

    Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~
  • simpleline's picture

    hahaaaiiiiii hidup tapi

    Submitted by simpleline on 23 June, 2011 - 11:38.
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    hahaaaiiiiii hidup tapi sekarat... hahahahahah good one ray! akwakwakawkk

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    haha, ya udh deh

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 23 June, 2011 - 11:32.
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    haha, ya udh deh makasih!!!

    trs bukan berarti ga alive dong, hidup tapi sekarat...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • simpleline's picture

    i'm sorry but it's not alive

    Submitted by simpleline on 23 June, 2011 - 11:29.
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    i'm sorry but it's not alive yet Smile

    trus bagus kan kalo komik elo selalu rame... artinya banyak yang perhatian tuh akwakawkwakwakwakk... menurut kamus gianeka : kalau ada orang komen artinya dia perhatian, walau komen jelek pun at least dia perhatian hahahaha... kalo ga perhatian ngapain repot2 komen akwkawawkawkakk

    semangat gan!

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    hmmm, so it can be said: my

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 23 June, 2011 - 11:26.
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    hmmm, so it can be said:

    my comic have shape, alive, but doesn't have soul...
    just like its creator....

    wkwkwkwkwk, entah kenapa (hampir) semua komik gw pasti rame pembicaraan... dulu ada kiky lbh rame lagi...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • simpleline's picture

    wow... rame...

    Submitted by simpleline on 23 June, 2011 - 11:18.
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    wow... rame... ahahahahaahh

    rpg san, let me give you what my sensei said :

    pencil gives shapes, ink gives the soul, and story makes it alive

    *who is my sensei? secret Tongue

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • Crow's picture

    Now cut that "i am no good"

    Submitted by Crow on 23 June, 2011 - 02:04.

    Now cut that "i am no good" crap, you won't be praised unless you are some kind of hot shit, you are hot shit and try to keep living with your head's up..no more whining, if all you can do is whining, then stop drawing..
    this world is not full of rainbow..
    you do have anyone supporting you, and when i said "i am waiting for your comic" i mean it.. i do mean it..
    don't care with that crap it is your feeling or Not, you can do it and i knew it..
    dare to be great, you don't need to listen to anyone who insult you, and look down on you..all you need is their advices. weakness means losing, if you can't fix that weakness alone, then ask someone to befriend with you, they will help you..
    learn, cowards is not accepted in this world.. i know i am not one to talk here, i just.. well maybe it could help you.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • RPGNoZero's picture

    halaman terakhir pensil ko...

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 22 June, 2011 - 22:08.
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    halaman terakhir pensil ko...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • controllingtime's picture

    Satu-satunya yang membuat gue

    Submitted by controllingtime on 22 June, 2011 - 21:56.
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    Satu-satunya yang membuat gue ngasih bintang 2 adalah ceritanya.
    Bagus, tapi entah kenapa emang bukan selera gue.

    Sedangkan gambarnya, masih jauh dari yang mungkin gue harapkan atau pembaca kebanyakan harapkan.
    Kualitas gambarnya masih.. gak banyak berubah dari pas pertama kali gue liat gambar lo.

    What bad at the art of this comics:

    1. Proporsi. Gue jadi mau liat sampe kapan lo bertahan bikin komik dengan proporsi yang levelnya menengah ke bawah.
    Oke, proporsi yang terlalu akurat juga gak bagus, komik2 Jepang sering menerapkan itu tapi proporsi di gambar lo bahkan gak bisa menarik orang2 buat baca komik lo (at least, lo pengen masuk KOLONI kan? ini KESALAHAN LO YANG PALING FATAL yang bisa membuat lo gak diterima masuk KOLONI. Cerita memang akar dari komik. Tapi orang2 akan melihat gambarnya dulu kan?)

    2. INKING. Udah berapa kali gue bilang INKING setiap gue comment gambar lo? Itungin deh. Inking lo kayak lo ngesketsa kalo gue bilang. diurek-urek. Itu kalo gue liat. Entah lo beneran kayak gitu apa nggak.
    masalahnya, INKING ITU PENTING DI KOMIK. mau gambarnya sebagus apa, kalo tintanya jelek, harganya turun dan bagusnya jadi gak keliatan.
    INKING. INKING. INKING. tuh biar inget.

    oh iya, halamn terakhir itu lo tintain kan? Lebih mirip Rough Sketch belom jadi yang ditambahin teks. In My Opinion.

    3. Warna. Awalnya gue merasa warnanya bagus. suer. Tapi lo melakukan kesalahan lagi. TERLALU BANYAK EFEK CAHAYA (yang sering lo lakukan juga di komik-komik atau illustrasi lo sebelumnya) dan satu lagi: WARNAN DI HALAMAN TERAKHIR FLAT. Dan seakan lo menutupi itu pake efek2. Kurangin intensitas lo pake Dodge Tool sama Burn Tool yah. Walaupun lo nyangkal juga gue yakin lo banyak pake 2 tool itu kok. Keliatan banget mana yang main warna, mana yang main Burn/Dodge Tool.

    4. BG. BGnya lumayan. yang ngerusak BG lo? Kembali ke nomor 2 dan 3. ITU MASALAH UTAMA LO.

    Intinya: KEBANYAKAN EFEK, WARNA YANG BAGUS CUMAN DI HALAMAN 2, DAN PENINTAAN LO MERUSAK YANG MUNGKIN MENJADI BAGUS DI KOMIK INI.

    kesimpulan: Penintaan lo. Itu masalah utamanya

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