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Cinta pertama seorang cowok pendiem yang gak tau caranya naksir cewek. Maaf jelek, sudah saya bilang, saya bukan komikus dan gambaran saya jelek parah. oh iya, saya juga bukan penulis xD
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  • asuka's picture

    mas galeeeee.. ceritanya

    Submitted by asuka (not verified) on 23 October, 2011 - 23:37.
    5

    mas galeeeee.. ceritanya baguuuss T^T.. teringat jaman" smp nih xDD

  • administrator's picture

    nah JayGale, coba ajak Marina

    Submitted by administrator on 10 September, 2011 - 15:40.
    4

    nah JayGale, coba ajak Marina Chaa kerjasamaaa Laughing out loud

    we come in peace
  • Marinaa Chaa's picture

    ooo,,,tuhaannn!!!! agape

    Submitted by Marinaa Chaa on 10 September, 2011 - 13:36.
    4

    ooo,,,tuhaannn!!!!
    agape bgt!!!

    -cHaa-
  • Jalil Jalal's picture

    knock my head off

    Submitted by Jalil Jalal on 10 September, 2011 - 01:22.
    4

    knock my head off

    let`s go!
  • enjisapi's picture

    ceritanya bagus, tapi bahasa

    Submitted by enjisapi on 9 September, 2011 - 22:52.
    3

    ceritanya bagus, tapi bahasa campur2nya bikin agak aneh, sih Tongue IMO

    life is the art of drawing without an eraser
  • JayGale's picture

    ah.. iya... makasih

    Submitted by JayGale on 9 September, 2011 - 21:15.
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    ah.. iya... makasih sarannya.. se seriusnya saya.. hasilnya gini... Sad dan bentuknya gini.. Sad karena yg kepikiran ya begini...
    tp sayang juga ya kalo ceritanya bagus tapi komiknya jelek... kalo minta dibikinin komiknya gimana? ahahaha curang..

    aku tidak membenci dunia, kamu jangan sotoy
  • administrator's picture

    wuiiih galau beraat...

    Submitted by administrator on 9 September, 2011 - 21:09.
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    wuiiih galau beraat... ceritanya bagus bung! kalo soal gambar, langsung tembak aja yang gambarnya bagus disini, siapa tau cocok dan bisa kerjasama Laughing out loud

    we come in peace
  • simpleline's picture

    ah this is the kind of story

    Submitted by simpleline on 9 September, 2011 - 20:54.
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    ah this is the kind of story that can be develop into a deep storybased plot...the presentation however is too strip-like, and the storytelling felt awkward because of the mixed language and time jumping here and there.... if only you make this plot more serious i'm pretty sure this can be a tearcracking story.... i don't mind the drawing, story is always the important one.
    goodluck jay san... you know i'm your fan
    =3=

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • legacy's picture

    Keren mampus! Ceritanya

    Submitted by legacy on 9 September, 2011 - 19:24.
    4

    Keren mampus! Ceritanya wow... ada perasaan gimana gitu waktu baca ini komik. ^^d

    Just think that everything will be okay
  • JayGale's picture

    makasih... saya galau sendiri

    Submitted by JayGale on 9 September, 2011 - 19:09.
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    makasih... saya galau sendiri pas bikinnya.. :'(
    maaf gambarnya jelek, aku ga bisa gambaaarrr... Sad gambarin dong, aihihi Laughing out loud

    @RPGNoZero merendah aja... Tongue anda jago ko'

    aku tidak membenci dunia, kamu jangan sotoy
  • animania22's picture

    coollllllll..!!!!!!!!

    Submitted by animania22 on 9 September, 2011 - 16:51.
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    coollllllll..!!!!!!!!

  • RPGNoZero's picture

    SUMPAAAH CERITANYA KEREEN

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 9 September, 2011 - 16:05.
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    SUMPAAAH CERITANYA KEREEN ABIIIIS!!!!!!
    GW TERHARUUUUU!!!!

    gw ga mau komentar soal gambar deh....
    oe ga berhak belagu dgn skill yg dua-duanya ga jago

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • ugik013's picture

    simple story nice, but its

    Submitted by ugik013 on 9 September, 2011 - 09:29.

    simple story nice, but its need proper artwork

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