The Injection
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This is the story when the human it self destroying the "chains of the world balance" when people cannot die from deseas nor by the year old so some genius proffesor Xyaraid Martel discover something like medicine with the ultimate immune from all the forms of viruses and also the ultimate anti-aging body so the mankind can live for more hundred years but every path that mankind choose it must have the price they must pay for all what they done it is the mutation that happen because of the medicine that has been producting for over 50 years and now the world turn into Hell intead of Paradise that they think so dreaming about and world turn into real Chaotic world and it's all happening because of this medicine that called
" The Injection "
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oooooo gt ya kk izanago ok
Submitted by vandez on 10 January, 2012 - 09:11.oooooo gt ya kk izanago ok deh nanti tak bagus sin deh gambarnya yg jdi masalahnya ceritanya kependekan and gambarnya jelek kan? well baiklah saya akan melakukan yg kebih baik lagi i'll do best with all i've got! so just stay tune kk Izanagi ok ok ok

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udah? gitu doang? ugh men.
Submitted by irzaqi on 9 January, 2012 - 16:15.udah? gitu doang? ugh

men. ini konsep ceritanya bagus. saia suka.
tapi eksekusi konsep artnya tampak kurang sip.
desain mutasinya mungkin bisa lebih dikerenin lagi.
coba cari referensi cerita2 sejenis. misalnya devilman, zetman, guyverd, dan lainnya.
saia rasa bro vand masih butuh banyak acuan untuk soal konsep art.
keep it up. masih bisa lebih baik lagi bila sgra aksi mulai dari sekarang. goodluck
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