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Haru no Kaze

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Dear readers, tolong luangkan waktu untuk membaca ini dulu ya sebelum baca komiknya~ Arigatoo [img]http://www.ngomik.com/themes/kimong/js/markitup/sets/default/iconpack/nyengir3.gif[/img] Caution ! 1. Ini karya saya 5—6 tahun yang lalu, jadi maaf-maaf yaa kalo semuanya pake pensil, panelingnya berantakan, proporsi tubuh cacat, dan tone seadanya... =w=; 2.Ini gambar pure ga diedit lagi sama saya kecuali bagian balon. 3.Judulnya harusnya “haru no kaze”. Tapi, berkat ke-sotoy-an saya dahulu, saya nulis di covernya jadi kaze no haru aja dong... *slap* 4.Kebiasaan saya dari dulu, suka banget gambar duluan cover chapter yang menggambarkan keseluruhan isi dari chapter tersebut, jadinya di komik ini pun yang lengkap cuma cover per-chapternya. 5.Well, yang jelas karya yang bisa disebut doodle ini saya bikin dengan sepenuh hati dan seluruh kemampuan saya pada waktu itu. Enjoy it ! [img]http://www.ngomik.com/themes/kimong/js/markitup/sets/default/iconpack/nyengir3.gif[/img] Leave comment please, i want to know what are you thinking about this. ^^ sinopsis: Fuko, siswi kelas 1 SMA yang bersemangat tapi agak bodoh, tiba-toba ditunangkan oleh Kaze, anak dari sahabat Ibunya sejak kecil yang tinggal di Hokaido. Kebalikan dari Fuko, Kaze orang yang cool and cold (??) =>keren, pendiam, dan dingin maksud pengaran (lol) Ditinggal Ibunya ke Hokaido, akhirnya Fuko dan Kaze tinggal berdua saja di rumah Fuko di Tokyo?? Terus gimana ya perkembangan hubungan mereka?
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  • ethzkillz's picture

    kawaiii.. gambar 5-6 taon

    Submitted by ethzkillz on 12 October, 2011 - 18:19.

    kawaiii..
    gambar 5-6 taon lalu aja begitu apalagi skrg yah?
    hoho
    upload dund lanjutannya,, aq penasaran abis!

  • Crow's picture

    ah yes, that's what kind of

    Submitted by Crow on 28 June, 2011 - 17:37.

    ah yes, that's what kind of problem i do really hate about comic i industry here,

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • artoriya's picture

    arigatooo SHELIN766HI X3

    Submitted by artoriya on 27 June, 2011 - 19:58.

    arigatooo SHELIN766HI X3

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • Shelin766HI's picture

    Meskipun gambar 5-6 tahun

    Submitted by Shelin766HI on 27 June, 2011 - 15:44.
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    Meskipun gambar 5-6 tahun lalu, tapi lumayan bagus juga kok Smile

    Cuma ada beberapa bagian yang proporsinya aneh. Tapi setidaknya masih lebih bagus daripada gambar saya *pundung gaje*

    Oke, aku kasih rating 3 ya ^^

    Never Say Never! Do the best, God do the rest!
  • artoriya's picture

    i agree, i think

    Submitted by artoriya on 27 June, 2011 - 10:40.

    i agree, i think visualization will be the first thing our market see. great artwork will have more value for a newbie artist. well, this is my comic about 5--6 years ago after all, i just upload it for fun, remind me what my artwork was look like. there are many messy things here, and now i'm trying make a better, good comic which is have a selling point.

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • Crow's picture

    EH? awesome, i don't know if

    Submitted by Crow on 26 June, 2011 - 23:00.
    3

    EH? awesome, i don't know if it will sell or not, our market is not mature enough to receive the story only comic or manga.. i mean a manga which is better in the story compared to the.. err visualization..
    this one is fine.. but unless you have a better drawing, no sell..

    well that's our problem.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • artoriya's picture

    @emonichi haha,

    Submitted by artoriya on 25 June, 2011 - 12:21.

    @emonichi haha, arigatooo,kimy~ X3

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • emonichi's picture

    nunggu Konflik

    Submitted by emonichi on 25 June, 2011 - 12:11.
    4

    Karena ini cerita SHOUJO aku kasih 4 bintang^^a hehe tapi dengan syarat harus update ya >__<

    nunggu konflik yang terjadi heee seru kayaknya

    viva A.G.E. Explorer XD
  • artoriya's picture

    @simpleline haha, i love your

    Submitted by artoriya on 25 June, 2011 - 12:02.

    @simpleline haha, i love your comment! ya, ini komik yang saya buat pas baru bisa gambar kepala doang. badan ya seadanya gitu. Thanks ya buat komennya, now i'm tryin to make a better, err, a good comic right now ^^

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • simpleline's picture

    ah part 1 doang ya yang di

    Submitted by simpleline on 25 June, 2011 - 11:18.
    3

    ah part 1 doang ya yang di upload....
    well, humor ibu melempat pisau ke anaknya sih menurut gw gak pantas banget untuk komik begini hehe Smile yah pendapat pribadi.... n terasa tidak ada hubungannya dengan adegan-adegan berikutnya, terlalu terputus.... anyway, storytellingnya emang masih berantakan haha, basic gambarnya udah oke namun tidak rapi... tapi ya sudah lah... 6 tahun lalu mungkin aku cuma bisa menggambar shinchan... walau hari ini pun masih menggambar shinchan
    upload lanjutannya ya kalau ada... goodluck

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • artoriya's picture

    arigapyooon~ X3 aku belum tau

    Submitted by artoriya on 24 June, 2011 - 22:21.

    arigapyooon~ X3
    aku belum tau mau bikin next storynya apa ga, soalnya ini karya lama. sekarang dalam proyek komik baru... ^^;

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • ITA's picture

    gambarnya jepang

    Submitted by ITA on 24 June, 2011 - 22:15.
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    gambarnya jepang banget..
    ceritanya gokiiiil
    next stornya cepetan ya dibiki ckp penasaran

  • artoriya's picture

    iya, ga dilanjutin lagi sejak

    Submitted by artoriya on 24 June, 2011 - 22:14.

    iya, ga dilanjutin lagi sejak itu soalnya vacum ngegambar selama 4tahun =w='

    sekarang komiknya masih otw, tapi mungkin RPGNOZERO bisa liat artworkku ^^

    waa, makasih kritikannya ! XDD

    Draw with all of your heart, and make it LIVE. #Soul in your Art
  • Syahinaz Recca Maheswari's picture

    bagus lho.. aku suka .. tapi

    Submitted by Syahinaz Recca ... on 24 June, 2011 - 22:05.
    3

    bagus lho.. aku suka .. tapi kok.. ngantung ==a

  • RPGNoZero's picture

    hooo, udh ada cover buat

    Submitted by RPGNoZero on 24 June, 2011 - 22:04.
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    hooo, udh ada cover buat chapter berikut gitu... tapi ga jadi dibikin yach?

    beneran 5-6 taun lalu nih? bagus loooh? kalo sekarang udh kaya gimana? liat dongx

    BTW, beberapa kotak ada yang peletakkan balon katanya ga enak. kaya jadi dari kanan ke kiri gitu...dll...

    sip2 ditunggu karya2mu yg berikutny...

    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
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