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Golden Fruit

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Ini komikku dari tahun 2008. Menceritakan Buah Emas yang berkhasiat dahsyat. Seorang penjual mencoba menjualnya di suatu desa. Serentetan kejadian terjadi hingga akhirnya buah itu berpindah kepemilikan.
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  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    hmm

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 10 May, 2011 - 11:28.
    3

    ceritanya sederhana,,tapi konsepnya bagus^^

    oke...^^

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Pratama Wirya's picture

    Betul. Banyak hal yang

    Submitted by Pratama Wirya on 8 May, 2011 - 21:30.

    Betul. Banyak hal yang relatif di dunia ini Smile

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  • esa-pavlichenko's picture

    ceritanya bagus nih sesuatu

    Submitted by esa-pavlichenko on 5 May, 2011 - 23:32.
    3

    ceritanya bagus nih Smile
    sesuatu yang sangat berharga bagi orang lain bisa tidak berharga Laughing out loud

    tergantung dari cara kita melihatnya ya? Laughing out loud

  • Pratama Wirya's picture

    Golden Fruit-nya ya karangan

    Submitted by Pratama Wirya on 4 May, 2011 - 20:10.

    Golden Fruit-nya ya karangan gue aja Laughing out loud

    Terlalu banyak obyeknya di komiknya ya? Bener juga sih.

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  • Crow's picture

    i see..a cool motivator then,

    Submitted by Crow on 4 May, 2011 - 17:01.
    2

    i see..a cool motivator then, that is a nice job too

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • 33 san's picture

    the concept is so nice, and

    Submitted by 33 san on 4 May, 2011 - 11:07.
    3

    the concept is so nice, and the morale message too -- well basically it's too crowded to be a comic. But nice Wir -- saya sempat mikir golden fruit itu fake? Fake bukan? hahaha.

    Anyway gianeka, he's not an appraiser. He's a motivator. He always motivate me up in FB Laughing out loud

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  • Crow's picture

    yeah appraiser is way better

    Submitted by Crow on 3 May, 2011 - 23:44.
    2

    yeah appraiser is way better idea in making money and lighting up the future, yeah better than thief or net-cheater, well i was a net-cheater too..but well...i see no point doing it, so i stop..and learning hacking..but not feel so good.
    really? is there any net-cheater you knew? cool.

    and Wirya san..well so you are not an appraiser huh.. okay then

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • Pratama Wirya's picture

    Thanks. No, I'm not an

    Submitted by Pratama Wirya on 3 May, 2011 - 23:30.

    Thanks. No, I'm not an appraiser Tongue

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  • simpleline's picture

    gianeka san... do you think

    Submitted by simpleline on 3 May, 2011 - 23:21.

    gianeka san... do you think it is a better job than a thief or a hacker or maybe a net-cheater... those job is the trend of nowadays...

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • Damantine's picture

    woooo like it... simple art

    Submitted by Damantine on 3 May, 2011 - 23:19.
    5

    woooo like it... simple art ^^b~ tapi kok isinya cuma nawarin buah ama makan yak...?? Tongue maunya ada tukang yang lain gt kaya mi dan bakso..Laughing out loud wakkakakakakakaak
    GANBATTE ya~ TERUS BERKARYA

    Let's Try Our Best and don't forget to Praying ~~
  • Crow's picture

    Agree..and the last page

    Submitted by Crow on 3 May, 2011 - 23:11.
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    Agree..and the last page telling us about basic of valuation, that was cool, you must be an appraiser right? maybe yes, maybe no, appraiser is not a common job you know..that is a cool job

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • simpleline's picture

    ceritanya sederhana namun

    Submitted by simpleline on 3 May, 2011 - 22:51.
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    ceritanya sederhana namun diikuti dengan storytelling yang tidak terburu-buru...gambar cukup oke tuh, bisa jadi gaya tersendiri...namun tampaknya tidak ada makna jelas yang bisa tertangkap dengan gamblang dari cerita ini, sampai ending pun tampak tidak dibuat sebuah kesimpulan... yah mungkin kamu mempersilahkan kami para pembaca untuk membuat kesimpulan sendiri..
    good joob !

    berikutnya panelnya bikin pakai penggaris dan pake spidol yang lebih tebel dari yang dipakai untuk gambar

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • Crow's picture

    I am reading it now, wait

    Submitted by Crow on 3 May, 2011 - 22:29.
    2

    Okay, i think fix the panel and speaking balloon, and about the drawing, it was okay and neat, tidy it up would be nice, the toning kind of remind me to naruto..and the story, your story is looks like a concept of appraisal..cool.

    2 stars

    I am not person worthy of your concern
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