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GOAL (teaser)

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menceritakan tentang 3 sahabat yg berusaha menjadi pemain sepakbola professional ... (sorry kalo cuma teaser)
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  • ara_marz's picture

    komikkk baru yaaaaaaaa.... kd

    Submitted by ara_marz on 18 December, 2011 - 11:19.
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    komikkk baru yaaaaaaaa.... kd blang" neahhh

  • Rifqi Alif Maulana's picture

    mantab

    Submitted by Rifqi Alif Maulana on 15 September, 2011 - 08:29.
    5

    mantab

  • apiznyoo's picture

    lanjutkan, i want to read

    Submitted by apiznyoo on 5 September, 2011 - 14:43.

    lanjutkan, i want to read anymore Laughing out loud :D Laughing out loud

  • Hex's picture

    yes this is good, but you

    Submitted by Hex on 20 August, 2011 - 00:33.
    3

    yes this is good, but you must to practice more in order to become better...

    HEKIM!!
  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    thanks ya buat semua atas

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 19 August, 2011 - 07:03.
    5

    thanks ya buat semua atas komen n masukannya ...
    saya akan berusaha untuk bisa membuat yg lebih baik dari ini ...

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • simpleline's picture

    my opinion is the line is

    Submitted by simpleline on 19 August, 2011 - 01:07.
    3

    my opinion is the line is still to timid, like you are hesitating when doing the strokes... and head-face proportion is sometimes messed up a little...
    but overall you did a good job

    ~there is no such thing as friend~
  • Enjie_Dakko's picture

    eyeshield X bleach manga

    Submitted by Enjie_Dakko on 18 August, 2011 - 13:22.

    eyeshield X bleach manga style artist
    tapi oke kok bro! Smile

    Babad habiissss!!
  • Date Sin's picture

    aaaaw saya suka dengan

    Submitted by Date Sin on 18 August, 2011 - 12:24.
    3

    aaaaw saya suka dengan laki-laki berwajah gila XD *kalo di komik.

    Keep learning with trying it. Smile
  • irzaqi's picture

    OK. saya kasih bintang 3.

    Submitted by irzaqi on 18 August, 2011 - 11:47.
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    OK. saya kasih bintang 3. komennya: cukup lah.
    kritiknya mungkin masih kurang luwes aja garisnya. tinggal lebih rajin2 ngomik aja.
    nah, kalau boleh sih saya juga mau kasih saran:
    bro bisa mulai ngomik dengan nyontek gaya Eyeshield 21. (cuma sebagai dasar aja biar fokus, sepertinya bro ada kecenderungan ke sana). nanti kalau bro sudah menguasai gaya Eyeshield 21, baru bro bisa coba gaya lain. soalnya kalo kebanyakan nyoba gaya ini itu biasanya jadi gak satupun gaya yg dicontek itu bisa dikuasai secara matang. akhirnya kualitas kita cuma setengah2 tambal sulam dari sana sini. jadi mending cari 1 patokan dulu sampe mateng, baru coba yg laen.
    lagian untuk komik GOAL ini saya rasa gaya eyeshield 21 cocok.
    btw, saya dulu juga mulai ngomik pake gaya dragon ball lho. sampe apal di luar kepala. hehe Smile
    oke itu aja saran dari saya. tapi kalo bro punya patokan yg lebih disukai selain eyeshield 21 ya silahkan. yg penting ada kiblat. fokus. semangat terus ya bro.

    I AM IMMORTAL!
  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    wah mang admin komen juga

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 18 August, 2011 - 10:22.
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    wah mang admin komen juga !!!
    ok mang admin ...

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • administrator's picture

    temanya masih jarang nih di

    Submitted by administrator on 18 August, 2011 - 09:13.
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    temanya masih jarang nih di komikoo. ayo lanjutkaaan Laughing out loud

    we come in peace
  • Jalil Jalal's picture

    ho.. mantap kom

    Submitted by Jalil Jalal on 18 August, 2011 - 07:01.
    4

    ho.. mantap kom @Ara_Sensei..!
    jaya sepak bola Indonesia!
    MERDEKA!!

    let`s go!
  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    thanks atas semua masukannya

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 18 August, 2011 - 06:13.
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    thanks atas semua masukannya

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • ole shinigami's picture

    Mantep.. ane demen sama komik

    Submitted by ole shinigami on 18 August, 2011 - 06:10.

    Mantep.. ane demen sama komik bola detail ky gini...

    awal yg baik... btw lanjutkan....

    (penasaran....T.T)

    ------- cHoaa yo ------ ----------AzZZZZZAAAAA-----------
  • Deviluke's picture

    wah ke postnya banyak... sori

    Submitted by Deviluke on 18 August, 2011 - 06:08.

    wah ke postnya banyak... sori jd coment 3x

    keren gan ceritanya, tp kyaknya ceritanya rada kaku krn gambar aja yang memegang peran dlm alaur cerit

    udah lama bikin ni account, baru skrng aktif ==a
  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    @Deviluke thanks, ya ...

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 18 August, 2011 - 06:04.
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    @Deviluke thanks, ya ... silahkan dinikmati dulu

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Deviluke's picture

    Art worknya keren, blm baca

    Submitted by Deviluke on 18 August, 2011 - 05:59.

    Art worknya keren, blm baca sih tp pertamax dlu baru baca Tongue

    udah lama bikin ni account, baru skrng aktif ==a
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