Feather 1 : When i talk about you, i talk about a hero

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Lychnus encounter someone who is suddenly borrow his comic, and truth to be told he is... download link: [url=http://bit.ly/nBEma9/]Wingless[/url]
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  • indra's picture

    Cerritana keren senpai,...

    4

    Cerritana keren senpai,... enak bacanya,.. teach me teach me

    I like MOJOKERSZ
  • alleyG's picture

    hiks..hiks..hiks.. Gianeka

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    hiks..hiks..hiks..Sad Gianeka butuh pelukan ala teletubbies Smile

  • vinna audy's picture

    GREAAATTT!!!

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    GREAAATTT!!!
    GANBATTEE!!!
    MANGSTAPP!!!
    TODAY, I HAD THAT
    AND...
    YOU GIVE ME SUPPORT FROM YOUR COMIC

  • dodododoodle's picture

    ceritanya dahsyat.. bener2

    3

    ceritanya dahsyat..
    bener2 deh ceritanya keren banget.
    walau art-nya (maaf) kurang bagus, tapi ceritanya bener2 bisa bikin orang berdebar..
    jujur aku juga ngalamin hal yang kurang lebih terjadi di komik ini ^^a
    semoga skill menggambarmu terus berkembang ya Laughing out loud

    toori sugari no freelancer da ! oboe toke !
  • legacy's picture

    Keren O.O And I like ur

    5

    Keren O.O
    And I like ur drawings... It's cool

    Just think that everything will be okay
  • Er Coez's picture

    wah...pas baca.. wah... effek

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    wah...pas baca.. wah...
    effek sama naluri kamu buat comic baguu.uuuss
    tapi coba kamu lebih latih lagi artya.. outline kamu masih kurang..( sama c kyak yg koment )

    sayang komik dgn naluri penceritaan bagus ttp artnya minus..

    overall mantabz.. jika saja lineartnya menunjang sangaaaaat manntabzzzz..

    silahkan kripik dan sarang madunya http://ercoez.deviantart.com kripik dan sarang anda membuat kami ada
  • boam's picture

    cerita : bintang 5 gambar :

    5

    cerita : bintang 5
    gambar : bintang 4,5 *sisanya harus pake asisten, baru sempurna. hehehe

    Over All : BINTANG 5

    sumpah... gw ga akan bisa bikin cerita dalem kaya gini, otak gian ini udah sejajar dengan mangaka di jepang sna... shonen abis...
    latar cerita yang simpel, karakter yang kuat, permainan emosi yang luar biasa, dan ending yang super memuaskan hasrat membaca komik...
    ahhmazing in 64 page, GREAT JOB!!!!!

    "As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be
  • nekosora yo's picture

    GANBATTE!!!

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    Cool Gian, good story, good character expression, very funny. You just need more thick pen I guess... the line is to thin. Just that. I love this one. tone? doesn't matter, just shadow on character is okay... so keep the good job. And say hello to palapanci from me...

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • johan chen's picture

    Wooow Kerennnnn,... Jadi

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    Wooow Kerennnnn,...
    Jadi Inspirasi nuih ceritanya,...
    hehehehehehe ^^

  • misuu's picture

    aliran akspresif, latar

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    aliran akspresif, latar bagus, gerakan dan alur cerita dapet.

    tapiii... ini masih sketsa. harusnya bisa lebih rapih lagi buat seorang yang expert dan komennya ditanggapi dmna2 kayak anda..

    oiya, saya sangat dejavu sama gambar yang pertama kali muncul. persis salah satu karakter manga terkenal Smile

  • adihaha's picture

    thumbs

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    i wanna give five. but I only have four, so I need to borrow it from you Gieneka

  • singanada's picture

    memuji itu mudah, tapi buat

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    memuji itu mudah, tapi buat apa bila itu tidak membuat sang mangaka menjadi lebih baik ?
    ceritanya standar manga jepang banget.
    asik ? ngga tuh. biasa aja kalau bukannya basi.
    ok dimulai dgn tokoh utama yg memiliki kekuatan besar ( tanpa penjelasan, pokoknya kuaaat khas jepang) tapi kesepian ... ngga bosen dgn tema seperti ini?
    mengenai ceritanya sendiri....
    kalau mangaka bersembunyi dibalik ketidak mampuannya menggambar maka krya apa yg diharapkan muncul ?
    bagus buruk bukan ukuran yg pasti, tapi benarkah mangaka sudah berusaha keras untuk mencapai kemampuan gambarnya ?
    coba baca comic bomber, meski sangat lebay tapi bisa memberi gambaran dunia perkomikan (yg lebay) di jepang .
    sudahkah kita mendekati usaha keras mereka ? ataukah kita hanya bersembunyi dibalik kalimat "yang penting komikku seperti ini" ?

  • matsu's picture

    woooooowwwww... angkat topi

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    woooooowwwww...
    angkat topi deh buat semangatnya bikin ini...beneran nular tuh semangatnya ke pembaca kayak saya...teriakan khas komik shonen..spirit up abis..

    si palapanci ya itu?

    my name is Rain
  • sule_prikitiw's picture

    gilak ceritanya bagus banged

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    gilak ceritanya bagus banged salut gua gi.......

    be my self.. visit my DeviantArt : www.dropbee88.deviantart.com
  • Januar Q Chaiianc's picture

    cerita keren dan lebay

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    cerita keren dan lebay mungkin, tp gw suka yg lebay2. mengingatkan pd diri gw yg lebay dan autis... hentai? gaaa, tuntutan profesi itu

    With the Great Power Comes the Great Responsibility
  • ara_marz's picture

    Feather 1 : When i talk about you, i talk about a hero

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    wah... critanya mantap dan juga gambar keren buangetzzz...

  • emonichi's picture

    Nice PLOT..nice EFFECT

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    wooowww.. i love which effect you've made, the ploy which you wrote too..looks like this story about mangaka's vent^^ , i hope it was not .. maybe you should try some tone maybe cuz the effect in battle was amazing i see, just adding some tone it would be a perfect effect.. GANBATTE ne~

    viva A.G.E. Explorer XD
  • johan chen's picture

    Ceritanya keren,... Gbrnya

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    Ceritanya keren,...
    Gbrnya jg,...
    palapancinya sbnrnya siapa itu yg lageee aq tunggu2,...

  • controllingtime's picture

    ceritanya dapet Yang kurang

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    ceritanya dapet Laughing out loud
    Yang kurang itu artnya. coba lebih telaten dalam penggunaan BG, proporsi, dan proses inking.

    Oh iya, belajar pake tone deh! Dijamin bakal bagus kok Smile
    Kalo mau minta tone, minta aja ke gue Smile
    Ntar gue kirim ke e-mail lo

  • Hex's picture

    koment

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    uwooooo! dramanya kerasa banget! XD
    mantab!!!
    tapi ada beberapa adegan yang gambarnya kurang jelas jadi kurang saya perhatiin (maaf ya)....
    gi-san kayaknya kalo bikin novel kayaknya bakal laku deh...wkwkwkw XD

    HEKIM!!

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