Feather 1 : When i talk about you, i talk about a hero
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Comments
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Cerritana keren senpai,...
Submitted by indra on 3 October, 2011 - 17:59.Cerritana keren senpai,... enak bacanya,.. teach me teach me
I like MOJOKERSZ -
hiks..hiks..hiks.. Gianeka
Submitted by alleyG on 29 September, 2011 - 01:19.hiks..hiks..hiks..
Gianeka butuh pelukan ala teletubbies 
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GREAAATTT!!!
Submitted by vinna audy on 30 July, 2011 - 12:44.GREAAATTT!!!
GANBATTEE!!!
MANGSTAPP!!!
TODAY, I HAD THAT
AND...
YOU GIVE ME SUPPORT FROM YOUR COMIC
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ceritanya dahsyat.. bener2
Submitted by dodododoodle on 17 July, 2011 - 22:00.ceritanya dahsyat..
bener2 deh ceritanya keren banget.
walau art-nya (maaf) kurang bagus, tapi ceritanya bener2 bisa bikin orang berdebar..
jujur aku juga ngalamin hal yang kurang lebih terjadi di komik ini ^^a
semoga skill menggambarmu terus berkembang ya
toori sugari no freelancer da ! oboe toke ! -
Keren O.O And I like ur
Submitted by legacy on 17 July, 2011 - 08:57.Keren O.O
And I like ur drawings... It's coolJust think that everything will be okay -
wah...pas baca.. wah... effek
Submitted by Er Coez on 7 July, 2011 - 23:13.wah...pas baca.. wah...
effek sama naluri kamu buat comic baguu.uuuss
tapi coba kamu lebih latih lagi artya.. outline kamu masih kurang..( sama c kyak yg koment )sayang komik dgn naluri penceritaan bagus ttp artnya minus..
overall mantabz.. jika saja lineartnya menunjang sangaaaaat manntabzzzz..
silahkan kripik dan sarang madunya http://ercoez.deviantart.com kripik dan sarang anda membuat kami ada -
cerita : bintang 5 gambar :
Submitted by boam on 14 June, 2011 - 22:35.cerita : bintang 5
gambar : bintang 4,5 *sisanya harus pake asisten, baru sempurna. heheheOver All : BINTANG 5
sumpah... gw ga akan bisa bikin cerita dalem kaya gini, otak gian ini udah sejajar dengan mangaka di jepang sna... shonen abis...
latar cerita yang simpel, karakter yang kuat, permainan emosi yang luar biasa, dan ending yang super memuaskan hasrat membaca komik...
ahhmazing in 64 page, GREAT JOB!!!!!"As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be -
GANBATTE!!!
Submitted by nekosora yo on 14 June, 2011 - 11:10.Cool Gian, good story, good character expression, very funny. You just need more thick pen I guess... the line is to thin. Just that. I love this one. tone? doesn't matter, just shadow on character is okay... so keep the good job. And say hello to palapanci from me...
Curiosity never can kill a cat... -
Wooow Kerennnnn,... Jadi
Submitted by johan chen on 11 June, 2011 - 02:01.Wooow Kerennnnn,...
Jadi Inspirasi nuih ceritanya,...
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aliran akspresif, latar
Submitted by misuu on 10 June, 2011 - 23:57.aliran akspresif, latar bagus, gerakan dan alur cerita dapet.
tapiii... ini masih sketsa. harusnya bisa lebih rapih lagi buat seorang yang expert dan komennya ditanggapi dmna2 kayak anda..
oiya, saya sangat dejavu sama gambar yang pertama kali muncul. persis salah satu karakter manga terkenal

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memuji itu mudah, tapi buat
Submitted by singanada on 9 June, 2011 - 02:15.memuji itu mudah, tapi buat apa bila itu tidak membuat sang mangaka menjadi lebih baik ?
ceritanya standar manga jepang banget.
asik ? ngga tuh. biasa aja kalau bukannya basi.
ok dimulai dgn tokoh utama yg memiliki kekuatan besar ( tanpa penjelasan, pokoknya kuaaat khas jepang) tapi kesepian ... ngga bosen dgn tema seperti ini?
mengenai ceritanya sendiri....
kalau mangaka bersembunyi dibalik ketidak mampuannya menggambar maka krya apa yg diharapkan muncul ?
bagus buruk bukan ukuran yg pasti, tapi benarkah mangaka sudah berusaha keras untuk mencapai kemampuan gambarnya ?
coba baca comic bomber, meski sangat lebay tapi bisa memberi gambaran dunia perkomikan (yg lebay) di jepang .
sudahkah kita mendekati usaha keras mereka ? ataukah kita hanya bersembunyi dibalik kalimat "yang penting komikku seperti ini" ? -
woooooowwwww... angkat topi
Submitted by matsu on 7 June, 2011 - 18:47.woooooowwwww...
angkat topi deh buat semangatnya bikin ini...beneran nular tuh semangatnya ke pembaca kayak saya...teriakan khas komik shonen..spirit up abis..si palapanci ya itu?
my name is Rain -
gilak ceritanya bagus banged
Submitted by sule_prikitiw on 6 June, 2011 - 20:08.gilak ceritanya bagus banged salut gua gi.......
be my self.. visit my DeviantArt : www.dropbee88.deviantart.com -
cerita keren dan lebay
Submitted by Januar Q Chaiianc on 6 June, 2011 - 19:58.cerita keren dan lebay mungkin, tp gw suka yg lebay2. mengingatkan pd diri gw yg lebay dan autis... hentai? gaaa, tuntutan profesi itu
With the Great Power Comes the Great Responsibility -
Feather 1 : When i talk about you, i talk about a hero
Submitted by ara_marz on 6 June, 2011 - 08:42.wah... critanya mantap dan juga gambar keren buangetzzz...
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Nice PLOT..nice EFFECT
Submitted by emonichi on 5 June, 2011 - 22:17.wooowww.. i love which effect you've made, the ploy which you wrote too..looks like this story about mangaka's vent^^ , i hope it was not .. maybe you should try some tone maybe cuz the effect in battle was amazing i see, just adding some tone it would be a perfect effect.. GANBATTE ne~
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Ceritanya keren,... Gbrnya
Submitted by johan chen on 5 June, 2011 - 20:07.Ceritanya keren,...
Gbrnya jg,...
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ceritanya dapet Yang kurang
Submitted by controllingtime on 5 June, 2011 - 19:52.ceritanya dapet

Yang kurang itu artnya. coba lebih telaten dalam penggunaan BG, proporsi, dan proses inking.Oh iya, belajar pake tone deh! Dijamin bakal bagus kok

Kalo mau minta tone, minta aja ke gue
Ntar gue kirim ke e-mail lo
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