ENTER! NIGHT FANG CHAPTER 1 : WINGS!
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Comments
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thank you very much
Submitted by Crow on 14 December, 2011 - 18:16.thank you very much
I am not person worthy of your concern -
Q_Q wooooghh...............
Submitted by nebulanikkei11 on 13 December, 2011 - 16:10.Q_Q wooooghh............... keren abis kk
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woogh keren dah,.. smua keren
Submitted by indra on 3 October, 2011 - 18:50.woogh keren dah,.. smua keren critanya, artnya,.. woohhh
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nice story,,, waiting for the
Submitted by ethzkillz on 13 September, 2011 - 13:56.nice story,,,
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need to upgrade your artwork,
Submitted by ugik013 on 8 September, 2011 - 08:51.need to upgrade your artwork, the story is nice anyway
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mantabz kali gian-sensei..
Submitted by Tsuciruka on 4 August, 2011 - 13:20.mantabz kali gian-sensei.. aku setuju kalau seseorang yang ingin kebebasan, tidak sama dengan Kriminal! ^^
komik simbol kenyataan,.. -
Waaaaaaaah!!! Gian-san, keren
Submitted by sagtavilia on 1 August, 2011 - 11:15.Waaaaaaaah!!! Gian-san, keren bgt! Penyampaian ceritanya terasa, dan karakterisasi tokoh2nya kuat dan menarik!! XDDD Gambarnya memang kurang rapi kalo mnurut saya dan masih bisa diperbaiki... kalo lebih rapi sedikit ini bisa jadi bagus! Saya suka sekali penyampaia n masa lalu Sylvie... ngena bgt!
Keep up the good wooork!
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Pertamanya lucu dan buat
Submitted by Date Sin on 27 July, 2011 - 12:26.Pertamanya lucu dan buat penasaran,
tp lama-kelamaan pas memasuki kota langit itu jd... kesan nostalgianya itu ilang U_U... agak kecewa sih...
Keep learning with trying it.
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waw sepertinya gian san
Submitted by shinji no ai on 27 July, 2011 - 06:26.waw sepertinya gian san mendengarkan masukand ari saya COVER nya sudah berhasil membuat gw tertarik baca men keren lu...trus kualitas gmbar sudah semakin baik walaupun gw rasa ini blom maksimal, kalo aja lu bisa lebih sabar ngerjain tiap halaman dengan mempertahankan konsistensi dan kualitas pasti bakalan lebih asik dan rapih lagi...
jujur style lu udah enak dari segi gesture udah asik banget dan gw berharap lebih dari ini gian..GANBATTE GIAN THIS IS A GOOD WORK!! AWESOME!!
i'am the son of immortal
MUSIC and ART is the Best FUSION!
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HAHA ditunffu
Submitted by RPGNoZero on 26 July, 2011 - 21:59.HAHA ditunffu lanjutannya!!!
kalko ada yg mw ngetone pasti perfectnih....
tone dari saya gfa dipake ich?"Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..." -
gian, nanya deh... lu suka
Submitted by boam on 26 July, 2011 - 21:36.gian, nanya deh...
lu suka bikin komik dengan beberapa adegan refrensi dari beberapa komik kah??
kayak naruto... beach, flame of reca dkk.... mau nanya aja
"As a talented person with huge aspirations, it’s easy to get over-confident. you’re showcased online, and you think you’re a prodigy No, you’re not. There are thousands of brilliantly talented young illustrators out there and you’re just one of them Be -
woooogh! nih koment dari
Submitted by Hex on 26 July, 2011 - 14:12.woooogh! nih koment dari gw:
*Dari segi gambar oe sukak banget sama covernya, SUMPAH...banyak penempatan gambar pada panel komik pas banget, banyak peningkatan kali ini tapi pemandangannya saya kira bisa ditambahin lagi
*Dari segi cerita tentu saja, saya udah bilang sebelumnya saya slalu suka sama ceritanya gianeka dan yang ini yang paling MANTAB! wakakakak
ditunggu kelanjutannya gi-san, GANBATTE!
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oh dang!!! i forgot one more
Submitted by simpleline on 26 July, 2011 - 13:30.oh dang!!! i forgot one more thing!
yuu know it's a trap/false mission but then he 'almost' felt desperately and hardheadedly (strange word) want to make sylvie realize what wings is all about...right? now that felt......
too-random-no-motives-timid-not logic things to do by yuu....
aside from that, the scene was told real well... well i guess not everyone notice this of course~there is no such thing as friend~ -
wings eh? kinda remind me
Submitted by prekotok on 26 July, 2011 - 13:24.wings eh? kinda remind me about "wing" in airgear manga....but in different meanings actually
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oh one more thing... the
Submitted by simpleline on 26 July, 2011 - 11:47.oh one more thing... the dialog of silvye father, how he was a crappy father and all that shit... now that's really not logic to me, not something a father would say to her daughter, moreover you kinda picture the father to be a wise kind, not a crappy kind...it felt not logic, i think it's better if the explanation of that crappy thing is by his heart only, but somehow his soul and silvye connect and then silvye cry.... afterall silvye is just a child that time....
~there is no such thing as friend~ -
........ okay...... 1. the
Submitted by simpleline on 26 July, 2011 - 11:17.........
okay......1. the cover composition is good, i like the color template used in it, pretty balanced and eye-catching
2. the opening of the manga is nice, and darn i love that scene at page 2 hahahahaaa
3. the drawing is acceptable, better than nightblade of of course
4. storytelling is good, i can follow the story flow easy, but the dialog is too stiff here and there, and some scene also have some wrong text-balloon... especially where characters talk to self...talking to self only happen in indonesian sinetron
, better use heart-dialog-balloon
5. the scene where knight princess show some tears in page 60, felt too soon... i would love it if knight princess stays strong until the end... a hero in her caliber must not show any tears in the presence of enemy
6. the talking about wings actually felt a little bit forced... i understand that both party has different meaning about the term wings, while sylvie sees that as honor and power to "uplift" her into skyworld, yuu sees that as a freedom... but the term is not really described quite on the surface, i would see this is deep, maybe too deep that maybe some people with average reading ability will have difficulties to connect with the main idea of this manga (which is wings)
7. so silvye send mission letter to nightfang because she wanted to be kidnapped... kinda remind me of garnet... and that explosion is art thing, deidara decendant?but overall that saying, this is a good piece, a lot better than nightblade series i must say, i can connect to the story quite fast, the atmosphere felt alive, yes i can feel the soul of the manga quite well actually... with some adjustment here and there, this piece could be perfect
thanks for sharing this...i love this
~there is no such thing as friend~ -
hmmm mnurut gw cerita bgs,
Submitted by Januar Q Chaiianc on 26 July, 2011 - 10:31.hmmm mnurut gw cerita bgs, dan gambar uda ada peningkatan dr komik2 sebelumnya, d tunggu lanjutannya
With the Great Power Comes the Great Responsibility -
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OF COURSE WISH U ALL THE
Submitted by [PALAPANCI] PEROMPAK XD (not verified) on 26 July, 2011 - 10:10.OF COURSE
WISH U ALL THE BEST 
think about your test first, that's important
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GANBATTEtry to be best person with great score

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ah well well...whatever then,
Submitted by now go to heaven with the name, i aint tell ya (not verified) on 26 July, 2011 - 10:05.ah well well...whatever then, wish me luck, good luck
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