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[i][b]GREY SCEED[/b][/i] ADALAH SEORANG ANAK YG BIASA SAJA, NAMUN PADA SUATU HARI SECARA TAK SENGAJA GREY MENEMUKAN SEBUAH [i][b]PEDANG[/b][/i] YG TIBA-TIBA MERASUK KE DALAM DIRINYA MENJADI SEBUAH [i][b]SEGEL[/b][/i]... KEMUDIAN ORANG-ORANG DISEKITAR GREY PUN MENGGANGAP DIA [i][b]MONSTER[/b][/i] ! KARENA TAK TAHAN DENGAN PERLAKUAN ORANG DI SEKITARNYA GREY PUN [i][b]MEMBUNUH[/b][/i] MEREKA SEMUA, TERKECUALI KEDUA ORANGTUANYA... ! GREY PUN DIANGGAP SEBAGAI BURONAN KELAS TINGGI !!! AYAHNYA PUN BERUSAHA MENYURUH GREY MENEMUI TEMANNYA UNTUK MENOLONG GREY UNTUK MELEPAS SEGEL ITU !! DAPATKAH GREY MENEMUI TEMAN AYAHNYA SEDANGKAN DIA DICARI SELURUH [i][b]PEMBURU HADIAH[/b][/i] DI SELURUH WILAYAH !!!
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  • Crow's picture

    Oh my God, let's cut with

    Submitted by Crow on 24 May, 2011 - 18:11.
    2

    Oh my God, let's cut with that capital letter okay...

    and the last page is cool, i am getting curious what kind of development you will show me

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    SORRY .. ! ! !

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 24 May, 2011 - 12:08.

    SORRY, YA BARU BALES ...
    INI EMANK BENER CUMA TEASERNYA AJA ...
    UNTUK CERITA YG BENARNYA NANTI AKAN SAYA UPDATE KARENA KEBETULAN SEKALI SAYA MASIH BANYAK PROJECT YG BELUM DIKERJAKAN, OLEH KARENA ITU MOHON MAAF YG SEBESAR-BESARNYA ...

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • ara_marz's picture

    ara_sensei

    Submitted by ara_marz on 24 May, 2011 - 11:59.
    5

    ia sich..... tlong lanjutkan jngan sanpai buat orang lama menunggu

  • Ara_Sensei's picture

    !!!!

    Submitted by Ara_Sensei on 24 May, 2011 - 11:52.
    5

    EMANK DARI KOMIK KAMU KAN ...
    KAN ABDINYA SENDIRI SEBAGAI PEMBUAT CERITA YGPENGEN PINDAH PENGARANG KE AKU ...
    KATANYA KAMU SUDAH TIDAK KONSISTEN DENGAN KIMIK INI ...

    Hello World !!!!! Iam a Indonesia People !!!!!!!!!!!!
  • ara_marz's picture

    ARA_SENSEI

    Submitted by ara_marz on 24 May, 2011 - 11:43.
    5

    CRITANYA BGUS BENER ,,, MIRIP KARYA ku dan abdi yang jdul nya YUICHI TRONK

  • Crow's picture

    This is what they used to

    Submitted by Crow on 25 April, 2011 - 21:38.
    2

    This is what they used to call professional, Nekosora san notice the drawing should match the story, and it is something that i did not notice myself. A long time ago someone told me (or not) that to make an interesting story the drawing should match the story itself. Nice Nekosora san.

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  • nekosora yo's picture

    gak tau kenapa...

    Submitted by nekosora yo on 25 April, 2011 - 21:21.
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    ini perkenalan tokoh atau iklan sih? atau komik yang diupdate harian? per halaman begitu? btw... kalo diliat dari story ama gambarmu kok jauh... jadi aku mikir ini bukan komik aslinya, tapi cuma iklan...
    ini bleach + naruto kayaknya... Smile

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • Crow's picture

    Maybe he is heavily

    Submitted by Crow on 25 April, 2011 - 21:18.
    2

    Maybe he is heavily influenced by Kubo Tite sensei, and maybe when drawing this character, he did read bleach for reference, it is a good thing too, since people find themselves through copying.

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  • stevanus bagus's picture

    style gambarnya mirip bleach

    Submitted by stevanus bagus on 25 April, 2011 - 21:01.
    1

    style gambarnya mirip bleach ya...klo bz yg agk ori lg...hehehe

  • Crow's picture

    well maybe you did not see

    Submitted by Crow on 23 April, 2011 - 16:11.
    2

    well maybe you did not see the appearance of the villain in the panel before that.. the villain pop out of the rubbish and attack the-looks-like-stupid-wanderer, well since there is tons of manga like that. maybe that scene that made it less special to you.or maybe you are just too tired Nakamura san.

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  • 33 san's picture

    tiba-tiba teriak "MATI KAUU!"

    Submitted by 33 san on 23 April, 2011 - 15:06.
    3

    tiba-tiba teriak "MATI KAUU!" di page kedua awal -___-" jadi bingung haha, at least leave us 10 pages or so -- well the graphic -- lineartnya tebal sih, but your detail is quite good. Looking forward for the continuation Smile

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  • Crow's picture

    it is cool..i mention about

    Submitted by Crow on 23 April, 2011 - 12:47.
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    it is cool..i mention about the scene anyway, not the drawing or the BG. the drawing looks ok, but the Background looks messy, and the SFX...don't ask me.

    it seems like an interesting story, maybe i'll check up later when there is further updates. well good luck

    sorry but, this update makes me lower the stars due to disappointment, but don't worry, stars can change depend to the updates. 2 stars for "wow" scene

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    wew

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 17 April, 2011 - 09:39.
    3

    ini baru cover ya....??

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    it is likeNaruto and ichigo

    Submitted by Crow on 16 April, 2011 - 12:25.
    3

    it is likeNaruto and ichigo did fusion.
    well i dont really know the detail but, it does looks like it..
    and well.
    kind of good thing to know too..
    anyway,you must be a fan of them right
    that's awesome.

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  • 33 san's picture

    hee baru art judul ya -- the

    Submitted by 33 san on 16 April, 2011 - 10:42.
    3

    hee baru art judul ya -- the main chara kinda a lot like Naruto.. sorry, I hope it's not.

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