Chapter 4 - Youkai Hunter

mantap pisan euy....stylenya kaya anime jaman 90-an jadi terkenang masa lalu cerita asiik ada yang moe moe moe

MUSIC and ART is the Best FUSION!

it is possible.
maybe you should consider about style and bringing history of our mighty nation into the surface,
but not only that, we take it into modern life with a brand new concept or just leave it at that at old nation styled but with an interesting development.

a comic and mangas need to be interesting, don't care what kind of stories and drawing you may had. interesting is the only way to stay alive in this industry.

no no no..i don't dislike the moe ..i like the moe..just this one is too moe for me..so i need time to adapt in this kind of moe environtment.
moe is good since thousands character become interesting when they are moe. right?
keep being moe.. well i don't know that you are a playboy yourself, but whether you are playboy or not, i'll try to help you improve as long as i have time and will
well.. i'll write the next review if i find something ..well.. needs to be reviewed in your manga

since it is reappear in the homepage. I did re read to your story.

First let me say sorry for what i want to say. I don't want to do a debate. This is my humble opinion, if you like it,use it. If you don't, Throw it away.

first about the graphic, about the art.. well it is nice to have passions to draw such annoying things, well like well drawn background or the character's face and body in such complicated manner. well it is very cool about that. I don't know but, maybe you made your character too moe or just well too moe, i find no other words to describe the feeling when i read your manga.

sorry, but for me it is less interesting because the movement as all bulky it seems like there is something in their hands or leg that binds em from using a flexible movement. I think it is less feeling.

sorry, about the story itself, it is interesting, and classic. well, the girl cling to the man and another girl appeared who was falling in love to the man too, while the man seemed too clumsy to realize that feeling. i don't feel anything towards the story itself but the way you presented it made it less interesting, actually i don't know how to put it into a words but.. it feels like too much girl and the boy is kind of (sorry) annoying for a hero well actually not that annoying tough, but the girl.. i think they are doing things ..well excessively(sorry i can't find any nicer words about this)

sorry, about the use of excessive japanese languages, i dont know what do you want but i had time when i love to put japanese language in my comic but finally most people againts it i didn't know the reason but i just want to tell you.

sorry, about the scene when the monster appeared and the scene where the Yukai hunter appeared, i think their pose at that time is less effective. i don't feel anything, since the pose looks ..well, less awesome. In my humble worthless tiny crappy opinion villain or well big bosses appearance has to be BIG, BIG and bind people hard to look at it again. When you could achieve such technique., you bound to get a lot of fans.

sorry but this is my personal opinion, i can point out any single panel that *in my humble opinion needs to be reviewed, but i just don't know which to start and i'm afraid that you might not like it, and of course i'm to lazy to do that, but if you ask me to..i'll try to.

that's all sorry Nekosora san. Three stars for your hardwork and graphic.

Busy man but you could make something as wonderful as this?
that means you are a pro ..
a pro did his ..they have no time yet they did their art beautifully

well, what'll happen next? have you made the rest?

- I'm not really count it, because I do it if I had a free time. I'm a bussy man.. Sad I hope got more free time...

the story is nice..kind of having a trouble in fightting the orks eh..
you know the detail is pretty good, lemme ask you something ..

how long do you need to make one page?

@roelworks : sebenarnya aku buat ini udah lama, tp belum sempat dipublikasikan aja...
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