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Chapter 1 - Sayonara Anata (Selamat Tinggal Sayang)

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Cerita tentang pasangan kekasih Aishia dan Mamoru yang mengalami kecelakaan sehingga Aishia kehilangan kesadaran selama beberapa hari. Mamoru yang kehilangan akal pun terlibat dalam perkelahian di taman saat pulang sekolah. Sesampainya di rumah, dia mendapati orang yang dicintainya sudah berubah menjadi seukuran action figure. Dan semenjak itulah peristiwa aneh dan ajaib selalu ada disekitar mereka...
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  • Crow's picture

    Pavlichenko san is a good

    Submitted by Crow on 22 April, 2011 - 22:16.
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    Pavlichenko san is a good friend of Nakamura san, you can ask Nakamura san when she is online tomorrow. well actually you could just send a pm to him. he is the author of Russian cold hearted sniper Pavlichenko. and his pen name is esa pavlichenko. He might be a good friend to Amanokawa san too.

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • nekosora yo's picture

    style ya?

    Submitted by nekosora yo on 22 April, 2011 - 22:08.
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    @ kiky2hikaru : masak sih mirip akira? sebenarnya dulu aku mulai menggambar itu pas waktu sailormoon main di indosiar, jadi hampir 75% style ku itu sailormoon(versi anime bukan komiknya) kayaknya deh....
    @ gianeka : I would really like to... how's that to contact Pavlinchenko-san?

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • Crow's picture

    Actually Nekosora san,, the

    Submitted by Crow on 21 April, 2011 - 22:21.
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    Actually Nekosora san,, the most interesting part of your comic beside the drawing is your langage, since the language ia radiating moe feeling which is interesting.
    have you contacted Pavlichenko san to read your manga?

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    menurutku

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 21 April, 2011 - 21:15.
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    menurutku memang agak midori no hibi,,,buat story...cuman untuk syle gambar klo kuperhatiin lebih ke arah akira toriyama...-_-

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • nekosora yo's picture

    itu masalah style komiknya...

    Submitted by nekosora yo on 21 April, 2011 - 21:10.
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    @ emonichi : kalau masalah bahasanya sih memang disengaja begitu, khusus Marubemiraku bahasa memang campuran jepang indonesia. Kalau Dangdut Traveler itu bahasanya campuran indonesia, jawa sama inggris. Nah, yang lainnya baru murni bahasa indonesia.... Tongue

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • emonichi's picture

    heheh nice tapi ..

    Submitted by emonichi on 21 April, 2011 - 12:11.
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    biar aku tebak ini cerita referensinya dari Midori no Hibi (Midori's Day)ya??hehe nah lo..aku suka gaya cerita n alurmu..
    SERIUSSSSS!!!!

    tapi... aduhhh campur-campur bahasa >__< bingung aku..heee..kalo menurut aku kalo mau bahasa indonesia, indonesia sekalian..kalo mau jepang ya jepang aja hee^^a
    kecuali judul kali ya^^a

    btw next baca ahh~

    viva A.G.E. Explorer XD
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    oke kom

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 29 March, 2011 - 11:20.
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    oke kom....

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    i see, so it was supposed to

    Submitted by Crow on 28 March, 2011 - 23:54.
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    i see, so it was supposed to be romance?
    then that's fine the drawing is a very shojo-like..
    that's what i feel.
    and the story was great too..
    so, are you going to continue...or to stop here..
    to stop at this distance is really sad, and i'll looking forward for your next work

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • nekosora yo's picture

    wkwkwk... 39 minna-san...

    Submitted by nekosora yo on 28 March, 2011 - 22:36.

    @gianeka : well, I made this one exactly 10 years ago... and this one is a love comedy manga... so there will be less action here, but thanks for the concern.

    @kiky2hikaru : udah sampe bab 3 tuh, bab 4 dst nya nyusul belakangan, pengin buat palapanci dulu... hehehe...

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • shuichi_akai's picture

    komik

    Submitted by shuichi_akai on 25 March, 2011 - 20:06.
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    komiknya boleh juga buat dibaca.... Laughing out loud
    kreatif juga y Laughing out loud

    SHUICHI AKAI BEST REGARDS FEDERAL BUREAU OF INVESTIGATION...
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    update

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 25 March, 2011 - 19:53.
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    chapter 2 nya udah di update???

    ku mw liat improve mu n jalan ceritanya...^^

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • Crow's picture

    it's looks like i've seen

    Submitted by Crow on 25 March, 2011 - 19:39.
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    it's looks like i've seen this kind of story in one of akagodzilla's work, some kind of soul trapped inside a stuffed animal..
    anyway, what kind of story is this? i mean, romance with some action? i think you lack a bit in fighting scene and expression.

    sorry

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • Crow's picture

    it's looks like i've seen

    Submitted by Crow on 25 March, 2011 - 19:36.
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    it's looks like i've seen this kind of story in one of akagodzilla's work, some kind of soul trapped inside a stuffed animal..
    anyway, what kind of story is this? i mean, romance with some action? i think you lack a bit in fighting scene and expression.

    sorry

    I am not person worthy of your concern
  • nekosora yo's picture

    mirip Midori ya?

    Submitted by nekosora yo on 20 March, 2011 - 22:59.
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    sebenarnya aku mau buat lebih panjang di prologue (chapter 1) tp takut pada bosen jadi ya kayak gitu deh... jadi mirip Midori, padahal harusnya lebih rumit..
    Tapi memang nanti akan dijelasin kenapa bisa kayak begitu di chapter-chapter akhir... (masih rahasia) hehehe...
    Tunggu chapter 2 nya ya? teksnya masih kacau soalnya...

    Curiosity never can kill a cat...
  • kiky2hikaru's picture

    wahh

    Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 19 March, 2011 - 12:16.
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    udah berpengalaman banget nih si komy or kimy ini...
    ampe garis bayangan detail banget......
    ceritanya mirip midori day,,maksudnya berubah jadi action figure..hehehe...^^
    tapi lumayan seru juga....

    lanjut kom kim

    KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI.....
  • roelworks's picture

    apart

    Submitted by roelworks on 19 March, 2011 - 12:04.
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    apart from the fonts, ok juga Laughing out loud garisnya familiar...

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