BENDERA
baca dari kanan ke kiri. takdir sedih pemulung jakarta, dalam mempertahankan negaranya.
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lanjut !!! jempol GUn
Submitted by Dudy Subagdja on 24 February, 2012 - 15:54.lanjut !!! jempol GUn
"Unfolds wing...hunddles up word !!!file:///D:/Pelpinz/chupu%20Silvy/frofile%202.jpg -
sebelum komen, harap
Submitted by musamushi on 22 February, 2012 - 06:22.sebelum komen, harap tinggalkan rate. ty
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sebelum komen, harap
Submitted by musamushi on 22 February, 2012 - 06:22.sebelum komen, harap tinggalkan rate. ty
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wah sori baru balas, ini
Submitted by musamushi on 8 January, 2012 - 19:45.wah sori baru balas, ini ceritanya mmg belum selese kk zephyranthes, pen gw ilang, belum sempat beli. masih kumpulin duit wkwkwkwk
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gayanya mirip odachin hehe
Submitted by zephyranthes on 5 January, 2012 - 00:06.gayanya mirip odachin hehe lucu bgt
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kok kaya blum selse
Submitted by zephyranthes on 4 January, 2012 - 23:57.kok kaya blum selse ceritanya?? gaya cerita yg unik, ahhahaha...
For The Greater Good -
nice..aku suka
Submitted by pelpin on 11 December, 2011 - 10:38.nice..aku suka pewarnaannya..tp gaya gmbr kharacternya mesti diperbaiki (dirapikan)
"Giving wings to freedom" -
@erica tq @tsuciruka
Submitted by musamushi on 11 December, 2011 - 05:37.@erica tq
@tsuciruka tq
@alleyg ok, sy akan terus memperbaiki style sy -
tone nya bagus,.. gaya2
Submitted by Tsuciruka on 7 November, 2011 - 12:23.tone nya bagus,.. gaya2 eichiro oda,. wkwkwk,..
wah, sama2 penganut komik perang saya harus banyak belajar dari anda neh,.. ^.^
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gaya gambarnya mirip One
Submitted by alleyG on 29 October, 2011 - 06:36.gaya gambarnya mirip One Piece, tapi ya gitu deh harus lebih di perbaiki lagi okeyyy... semangat!
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@all ty 4 leaving a comment.
Submitted by musamushi on 28 October, 2011 - 11:25.@all ty 4 leaving a comment.
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lhooo kukira nambah
Submitted by Lucchini on 25 October, 2011 - 00:39.lhooo kukira nambah halamannya orz, kok bisa dah didepan lagi
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ini kocak sumpah karaternya
Submitted by Peccopeak on 15 October, 2011 - 19:44.ini kocak sumpah
karaternya dpt bgt...
ada sedikit sindiran...
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hey it's pretty nice... some
Submitted by simpleline on 15 October, 2011 - 11:56.hey it's pretty nice... some of the background drawing is too stiff but acceptable...
the dialog is stiff, but i like the monologue part... it fits really well...
the pace is too fast i think, and the story felt so sudden in this first few pages
but i would love to see how it continues... please update!!!
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pengabdian pada negara
Submitted by Khi-Khi Kiara on 15 October, 2011 - 11:48.pengabdian pada negara tercinta...great!!! XD
cara penyampaiannya juga bagus..salute!!Nothing's impossible, till we say "Impossible"....
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