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hehe thank youuu!!
Submitted by prophet of warlock on 22 September, 2011 - 21:03.hehe thank youuu!!
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ok
Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 10 May, 2011 - 11:17.ok...its fine bro
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agree.. and i am sorry if i
Submitted by Crow on 9 May, 2011 - 17:39.agree.. and i am sorry if i looked like judging your pose, in case you were, i am not..
and don't thank me, thank yourself or God, you are greatI am not person worthy of your concern -
the comment
Submitted by prophet of warlock on 9 May, 2011 - 08:21.thank you for the praise and the critics. well, for the shading, drawing, and everything about the way I draw I'll try to fix it. And maybe I'll ask simpleline too about the proportion.
FYI I'm sorry, for the girl pose or the English isn't something which can be judge. It's up to the drawer's will. So, maybe I'll not consider it for while.
But thank you once for all for commenting!
Courtesy Waltocoria Severnaya ~ I will not lose my destiny over the wizard of fate -
Where is Roy san comment? are
Submitted by Crow on 6 May, 2011 - 20:07.Where is Roy san comment? are you playing trick on me...well up to you then Roy san
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okay, somebody point out your
Submitted by Crow on 4 May, 2011 - 20:03.okay, somebody point out your flaws, and i will doing that too..
maybe the girl pose, if the girls is hugging her knee, that would be awesome, with sad looking face, and her eyes staring at her precious chess pawn.maybe the shadow, it does not matter about the proportions, since i care nearly nothing about it, if you wanna be great, try different shading and style, you will find out a lot of fun stuff
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mari kita lihat
Submitted by kiky2hikaru on 4 May, 2011 - 19:45.mari kita lihat kekurangan dan kelebihan art ini:
kelebihan:
style shojo yg cukup bagus,apalagi posenya keren juga pake diangkat diatas meja
backroundnya juga cocok
yg paling kusuka pewarnaan kaos kaki hitam yg mempertimbangkan lipatan berwarna putih yg kontras dengan warna hitam itukekurangan:
jari tangan kiri kaya jari tangan lagi menelungkup..dalam artian salah dalam membuat jari tanagan kiri...
kedua...seharusnya jgn pake nama piece dijudul yg berhubungan dengan chess...secara aku pemain catur,lebih tepat dibilang pawn...KIKY HIKARU AND YUMI HIKARI..... -
the idea seems cool but the
Submitted by Crow on 30 April, 2011 - 22:16.the idea seems cool but the art is a little messy maybe, and the proportion maybe..ask Simpleline san
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