Post your story here befor it's too late

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there is no one post something here? well i am going to start it then. As wa all knows we made stories before making comic, it is one of the paramaters to call our comic awoseome or just good. Since a lot of comic artist lack in the story development, even profesional manga-ka sometimes did a terrible mistakes. Why dont you try to post, what kind of story you would like to make here? for example, i want to make story about A sniper fang, sniper fang is a warior who use a great sword. Their name derived from their special technique in using great sword. This story is about a boy called Shreinen whio is currently studying the art of Sniper Fang in the city state of Valgerra. Sniper fang's great sword called Pile dagger. well..that is for example, if you post it in here before you made comics, there will be small chance to incidetally making same story with another artist.

darn i can't use spoiler tag

hm let's change the policy here, since Nakamura san said that internet world is full of plagiarism, then why don't we just change it a little, write your  story in an unique way like codes and such, let's say this thread is to remind you about what you want to write and at the same time inspire someone to write another story, how's that sound? wrote:

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    People who learn sometimes
    People who learn sometimes reach the limit of knowledge itself. but  in this world there is people who is strong enough to break throuhg the limit, to learn the unforgiven, the dark secret of the world to reach power. someone said, when they played with life energy they become unforgiven, heart is weakness affection is forbidden, they who live in the deep darkness which they created, people call them Overcasts. Overcast divided into two Rune Overcast and Earl Overcast, Rune Overcast, the one who play with their own self Life energy and earl overcast, the one who play with their surrounding energy. A story about a former Omega, a squad who is currently in charge of eliminating dangerous overcast which finally eliminated due to their power. Ichierai Yamarao want to live his life to the fullest, but fate ask him to come back, to the world where darkness remain
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  • World Inverse Creator.
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    uh... a bit hard to do. I
    uh... a bit hard to do. I have so many stories, built up in typo style - stories. But it leaves at that. World Inverse is the most first series that I've ever made the comics. Kinda the same stories -- there must be two or three in this wide world. For some kind of Bleach, Naruto -- there're some small people coming up at the idea before, like "THERE WONT BE ANY PEOPLE COMING UP WITH THESE IDEAS" and such lol. And for giving story ideas, don't you feel people will steal it instead ? Anyway, for mine -- I will make it short: 1. Two's Bond Nia yang cerdas namun ketus dan pendiam. Ia bertemu kembar, satunya cheerful , satunya dingin dan menyebalkan. Semua orang pasti tertarik dengan yang cheerful bukan? Namun Nia berbeda, terlebih setelah mengungkap 'dark-side'nya .. 2. Beetle Surprise! Ayla mendapat hadiah ulang tahun dari pacarnya -- seekor kumbang! Ayla sangat menyukai serangga - tapi siapa yang tahu , kumbang itu ternyata dewa hutan? Ayla pun diberi tugas untuk menyelamatkan hutan dan isinya.. 3. The One Sudah muak dengan kenyataan -- Cryst mencoba bunuh diri. Orang tuanya bercerai, kenyataan bahwa ibunya seorang teroris , teman berubah menjadi musuh, belum lagi dikejar penagih utang sebagai jaminan untuk hutang ayahnya. Sesampainya di surga, Tuhan berpesan bahwa Cryst -- dan seorang lak--laki terpilih menjadi satu-satunya pasangan yang selamat dari kiamat dunia yang akan terjadi 1bulan kemudian .. eh...masih banyak sih. But I think I will stop there first.
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    really? people would steal it
    really? people would steal it instead? well if that so then let' just close this forum or make it dissapear so people wont be able to read it.. thanks Nakamura san, sorry for posting in such selfish topic
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    oh darn I shouldn't have said
    oh darn I shouldn't have said it.. I'm fine with it though. Well internet world is just full of plagiarism, even webcomics and stories, so if you are ready for the consequences, so be it.
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    it's ok to  say that, i dont
    it's ok to  say that, i dont even think about it from the first time.. sorry to keep making mistakes, in making comic, story or even posting stuff well let's see for three days, if no one posting in stuff ..lemme close this topic, it seems like i do terrible things now
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    :/ it's not that big, why do
    :/ it's not that big, why do you always be worried about small stuffs? well okay, let's see.
  • I wish... arigatou...
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    my stories + poem
    Okay then, i'll post the other stories too They're all connected to 2Ends17 anyway... I Call The Pack OF Stories : 5Tales ~The Two's Third Perspective~  Most of them are Dark Romance Story... semuanya punya poem Becoz i haven't decide the story as complete as 2Ends17 so i'll tell some of it in short: *WARNING!!! TOO MUCH SPOILER!! LOL!!!*  1. D4BDen1 ~Requiem Of The Crimson Sky~ 20 tahun sebelum 2Ends17 saat dunia yang diambang kehancuran oleh seorang gadis kecil berambut hitam yang mengaku sebagai 'Yang Dicintai Oleh Dewa'. Caim berjalan di atas jalan penuh daRah demi keselamatan adiknya yang diincar. Sampai akhirnya ia bertemu seorang, atu lbh tepatnya seekor yg mau membuat perjanjian dengannya untuk mendapatkan kekuatan, dengan suatu bayaran Tetapi untuk satu kali menyelamatkan dunia, ia harus mengorbankan suaranya, sahabatnya,  adiknya, kesendiriannya, dan yang dicintainya... Poem : All human beings are just god's toys, the dragons are their slave. Overseeing our actions under the Crimson Sky, they are free to End Us... 2. Our37SacredHOur ~Abyss Of Eternal Horizon~ Ratusan tahun sebelumnya  Aridane, gadis yang tidak pernah tidak berdoa pada Dewa. Suatu hari kotanya diserang, semuanya dibunuh, dan ia pun ditangkap lalu di-*****. Lalu setelah tidak berguna, ia dibuang...  Kebenciannya pada seluruh dunia dan pertemuannya dengan 'seseorang' melahirkan kepribadian kedua dari dirinya, ia menamakan dirinya 'Arizone'. Bersumpah untuk membalas dendam pada  dunia, ia memulai neraka. Tapi suatu hari, ia bertemu dengan seorang Raja dengan Vision masa depan yang tidak daoat dia bayangkan, ia memulai suatu perasaan padanya... Tetapi, suatu hari neraka kembali datang, keputusannya dalah 'Keduanya tidak butuhg seluruh dunia asalkan mereka bersama'. Tetapi, kembali dunia tidak menakdirkannya... Poem : They said all are equal in god's eyes. But there are only pain and sadness... Then i'll make my judgement and bring hell to this worthless world. "As long as we are together, we don't need this whole world." 3. 1LastPride ~Sight For Final Destination~ Terjadi 'sepertinya sama' saat 2Ends17 Dia, anak yang terbangun di klinik kota Eden, mengalami hilang ingatan pada saat gempa tersebut. Bertemu dengan dua gadis yang bernama 'You' dan Asuka, yang anehnya sepertinya pernah ia temui. Ia mengalami perjalanan panjang di kota bagian atas Eden, bertemu dengan  seorang lelaki yang Mengaku sebagai Kazuto, dan Gadis bernama Tsugumi... dan 2 orang yang  menghilang muncul tanpa ia sadari, Sei dan Sora. Ia mulai mengingat masa lalunya, ia yang kehilangan saudara kembar, kenyataan keberadaan You, dan kenyataan akan dirinya... serta Kenyataan akan masa lalu kota Eden. Poem : -not yet made, but it's all about memories and final sight- 4. The Two's Third Perspective ~Prayer Of The Endless Sky~ Cerita berjalan dari 12-10 tahun sebelum 2Ends17 - 7 tahun sebelum 2Ends17 - sama saat 2Ends17 - dan 17 tahun setelah 2Ends17 Sei dan Sora yang bertemu di menara jam, menceritakan satu-persatu kisah ornag-orang yang mereka temui dan masa lalu dunia. Lalu Sei teringat akan masa lalunya, ia yang dibenci karena  mata merahnya, pernah kehilangan shabat, dan memutuskan untuk hidup sendiri, bertemu kembali  dengan gadis yang pernah ada di masa lalunya... hingga akhirnya ia mengetahui kenyataan masa  lalunya, saat ia bermaksud menolongnya semuanya diambil olehnya. Sei yang hidup untuk mencari  jawaban 'arti kehidupan', melihat kehidupan seorang anak yang hilang ingatan di kota Eden.  Sora yang ada di menara jam, melihat kehidupan seorang lelaki yang mempunyai penyesalan  besar. Keduanya menolong kehidupan orang-orang, dan mereka pun bertemu kembali di menara jam untuk terakhir kalinya.... Poem : Even Though You Have No Wings...I'll Walk On And Carried On You On My Shoulder...
    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
  • MEITANTEI KIKY
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    akuy mau tulis story...^^
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    write em down Hikaru san
    write em down Hikaru san
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    that was great RPG san, just
    that was great RPG san, just make sure when you forgot, try to look back at here
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    that was great RPG san, just
    that was great RPG san, just make sure when you forgot, try to look back at here
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  • I wish... arigatou...
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    Are my stories good? you
    Are my stories good? you dan't have to worry, i already wrote it down in Notepad
    "Kenapa... Semakin ahli diri kita, Rasany begitu 1 artworl selese, nilainya tak seberharga waktu dulu lgi..."
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    oke
    oke...ntar klo ada waktu luang bakal ku post
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    hm let's change the policy

    hm let's change the policy here, since Nakamura san said that internet world is full of plagiarism, then why don't we just change it a little, write your  story in an unique way like codes and such, let's say this thread is to remind you about what you want to write and at the same time inspire someone to write another story, how's that sound?

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