My GirlFriend is Ghost Chapter 2

hoho you dare to lurk around this place huh? then i won't hold back, i read your comics a few times and it was kind of interesting, but, it's kind of boring as well, then why did i say it was interesting? It was interesting since i find the story running itself inside my head and not in your comic, you knew it is a little messed up i your comc, the story about love or whatever and each of the scene is too sudden, from jumping through window, the encounter with the girl, all of them are too jumpy and has no connection

i think you need to plan the story carefully if you want to make and interesting story, make a timeline, make the background, you can just draw a house to tell the reader if the story takes place in a house, you don't need to draw everything, just make it enough and explain the situation

an your artwork, i don't want to talk about it. Ah dammit, i can't help but holding back, i can't hurt your feeling dude.